Concrete Void

I’m becoming impatient,

Here waiting,

Waiting for a concrete lid.

Too many stop signs,

And lifetime bans.

I’m a good man,

So I’ve been told.

But there’s a chasm,

And the concrete’s,

Yet to fill the void.

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ivor20

G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

22 thoughts on “Concrete Void”

  1. I loved that the poem is obscure enough for others to put their own meaning into it. I laughed when you actually let Derrick know what it was actually about.

    Lol. I’m intrigued that you’re a plumber and a poet. That isn’t “draining” is it?😉

    On a happy note, I’d like to congratulate you for winning the Jason mask sculpture! My email is yayrperez@gmail.com. You can either email me there with your email address or post it as a reply to my comment. It’s up to you. Carrie, the artist, will then contact you regarding shipping the art to you. Congrats Ivor, on the behalf of Slasher Monster Magazine!!

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    1. Thankyou for your intriguing comment, haha, I was angry at the time of writing, hehehe, and that’s exactly how I meant the poem to be, open for interpretation. I’m not sure how I’ve won this prize from your Magazine, but I’m very thrilled and appreciative, thankyou, and I shall forward ny email via yours, and a little story about Ivor the Plumber/Poet

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      1. Lol. Well, Ivors, my blogs Poet Rummager and Slasher Monster Magazine host a giveaway on Fridays, and you visited one of them, left a micro-story about a “mask,” and got entered into the drawing. Congrats!! I shall check my email in a bit. Thanks!

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