I’m travelling to the City by train.
Going to see a BK Opera performance again.
My niece, a leading singer in the show.
And these carriages are gently swaying to-and-fro.
I’m arriving an hour early.
Doing so, quite deliberately.
As the venue’s a classic olden Hotel.
A bar to relax in, and have a spell.
Drink a boutique ale or two.
And some friendly chatter too.
A young lady, Julia, I meet.
She’s polite and sweet.
We shake hands and talk warmly.
Happily saying to me, she loves poetry.
And I offer her an Opera ticket free.
But alas, she’s about to take her leave.
Upstairs I go, soon the show’s to begin.
I’m eager to hear the young Soprano’s sing.
The Opera’s an unusual Production.
A lover’s tragic telephone conversation.
The four separate settings are of a Lady’s Boudoir.
Our singers attire, glossy gowns and silky nightwear.
There’s soft lighting, satin cushions and screens.
And the Opera is divided into four scenes.
In four Hotel rooms, with a Soprano Artiste’.
Our audience standing during each piece.
I’m transfixed, as the soloist sings.
And we applaud from the small room’s wings.
A most intriguing and wondrous show I’ve seen.
An Opera called, La Voix Humaine.
Ivor Steven.
Many thanks to Colleen of “chatter master”, for her helpful advice and encouragement. I found this piece difficult to explain and write the words. And attached here, the link to the details of BK Opera’s production of La Voix Humaine. https://www.bkopera.com.au/la-voix-humaine-2017
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It was adorable. : )
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked my poem, I found this one quite a challenge.
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It’s wonderful how you’ve described so much through poetry, it’s truly lovely! Sounds like a great night too! 🙂 x
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Thanks Arbie, that’s so sweet of you…x
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I love that you did this!! This made me so happy. I love when you tell us about your happenings. You’re an adorable and wonderful soul!
Thank you for doing this. 😉
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Thanks Mel, I’m so glad you liked thjs piece, I found it so hard to write and explain the show.😊 and the very unusual production that the opera company put on, do you think my words worked, and the story line wasn’t too disjointed. xx
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It worked perfectly. You gave it an air of wonder. You had me there and I loved the charm of the conversation with the young lady.
Quite adorable and because I know the back story… well it’s extra sweet for me. 😉
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You make me feel special Mel, youre such a sweetie,scom xx
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Ivor… you are special love! Truly you are dear friend!
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Scom, you’re the bestest
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Nicely done young man 🙂
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Bravo Ivor!!! Bravo!!!! You love the music, and the people, and bring it all together. ❤
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Thanks Colleen, especially for just giving me confidence to go ahead with this, your kind words allowed me to wake up with renewed enthusiasm for my own abilities xx
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Aw Ivor, you give me too much credit. It was all you (and maybe a little bit of sleep!) 🙂 Well done friend.
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You filled me with joy and you help me free myself of those nagging self doubts…….
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Then we do that together. 🙂
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Haha, like partners in crime…
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Yes. 😉 Like that. 🙂
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Bravo Ivor!
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Excellent, flowing, description, Ivor
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Thanks Derrick, I’m so that you thought it flowed ok.😊
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That’s what plumbers do, 🙂
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Ivor – you’re always full of surprises. What’s next? it’s always great, but sometimes scary to broaden your horizons. You did a great job on this one.
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Thanks Patrick, “broaden your horizons” I like these words, and sometimes I wonder about the reality of the statement, is it possible to do so !!
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Wow! Your words make the show really come true right before my eyes, Ivor! How extraordinary and wonderful to write a poem about your visit to the Opera! It´s such a lovely idea! Loved the flow of the piece that carried me from verse to verse on gentle wings and soprano voices 🙂
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Thankyou, I’m so happy that you thought it flowed ok.😊. It was so hard for me to capture the essence of the show.😊
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I think the pieces we struggle the most with, be it in writing, composing, painting etc., are the ones that succeed the most 🙂
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You’re probably right, but the actual opera production was so uniquely done and hard to explain by poetry prose.
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That was a lovely piece Ivor, thank you. Your enjoyment of this opera really showed through. 🙂
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Thanks Sue, it was truly a unique production
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It showed !
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Lovely!!!
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What a magical evening! Your prose was perfect in description and rhyme.
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Great, I just wasn’t sure, it was so difficult to describe
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Awww! Ivor, this is awesome. You brought alive the opera with your words strung so beautifully together. Bravo!
Loved it.
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Thank you Punam, I’m pleased you like my poem about a night out at the opera. It was such an unusual event, I hope you got the gist of it.
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Oh yes, your words painted a vivid picture and your joy was so palpable.
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Thank you, Oh my Niece April, she is 2nd from the left in the Featured Image.
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That’s great. You must be so proud of her.
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EXCELLENT! I can’t express how much I enjoyed this piece. It seems perfect to me.
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I appreciate your wonderful comments, thank you Paul.
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an interesting opera indeed, I don’t think I have ever heard of such a performance. and i like your story leading up to the actual show, a play in itself, as you took us by carriage and stopped for a drink after a thirsty ride and meeting a sweet person inside. a nice visit with you Ivor through your words.
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It was a performance and show, that I shall never see the likes of again, !!!
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