The Sandbox Writing Challenge 2018 — Exercise 5
What it is about you that you feel makes you
different from everybody else? From Calensariel, Impromptu Promptlings
I am not so different.
I am not an animal.
Crying in a cage.
I live in a bubble of air.
Like everyone else.
I breathe the same.
Stand alone during the game.
I limp and shuffle.
At this age, we’re all lame.
The brain is forgetful.
But the memory bank is full.
I tire more quickly.
And plug-in early.
Beauty sleep and a recharge.
Dream of a pretty face.
Tomorrow she’s a new showcase.
Life is no longer a race.
Hiking at her comfortable pace.
I am not so different.
I am not unlike you.
Like everyone else.
I seek love and grace.
Ivor Steven. (c) Feb 13th 2018.
Lovely Ivor! Don’t we all seek love and grace? Thankfully, our Father in Heaven offers both!
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Thank you Kayla, It was suppose to be about what I think makes me unique,
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It was a great poem!
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I think you did a great job with your poem. Love and grace are what life is all about. It’s so easy to show it to others, but sometimes harder to be that way with ourselves. (Are you sure you weren’t writing about me! Sounds an awful lot like me! Guess that proves your point, eh? 😉 )
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Oh, I love your comment, yes it’s about everyone, we’re all the same but different in a unique way. And there could be a special girl being mentioned ?
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Beautiful written Ivor! 🙂
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Thank you Dabir, I enjoyed this writing challenge
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Your welcome Ivor! 🙂
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I fell in love with this honest look at yourself and by doing so revealing the beauty of your humanity. The words tell me of a youthful spirit alive with much goodness even though the frame may need some extra TLC on some days. My favourite are those two last lines, the feeling of looking to belong to someone and to do it gracefully even as we age. love this very much Ivor, you have captured the essence of wanting to be loved and accepted as you are so beautifully.
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Thank you Gina, And yes I’m unique in my own way, your comments are very flattering
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Oh it’s beautiful and lovely xx
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Thank you Soiba, I was feeling good about myself for a change.
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Glad to know 🙂
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Love and grace… the perfect thing to seek… all the hugs, dearest. Xxx
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Thanks sweetie, I love your comment.
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Love to you, Ivor
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The same but different. I love your description Ivor. 🙂
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Thank you Sue, It was a good challenge for me.
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Something always worth remembering
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Thank you Derrick
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😍❤️ this is so sweet, so honest, so you my Ivor. It is refreshing and riveting. Wise and striking. Love and grace indeed, we all seek.
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Thank you, Your lovely comments are making me feel younger already xx
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Beauty is in the soul, not in the youth ❤️ and you have so much of it!
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I’m humbled by your flattering words.
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My words only cast the reflection of your incredible soul
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Well, my soul showers your incredible soul with lots of Ivor hugs ooxxoo
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Received warmly 🤗❤️ my fabulous friend ❤️
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Always my pleasure
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❤️
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I suppose racing has it’s merits, but so does a good and steady pace without the race! So true Ivor.
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I’m hiking to catch up with you, but I’ve no compass
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Trust your heart and your gut.
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Ok , shall do xx
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Beautiful!!
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Thanks Walt.
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You’re welcome!
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Love and grace can someone ask for more❤️
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Thank you for your kind words ❤️❤️
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You captured me perfectly!
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Haha, you’re not the first one to say that, seems I’ve got lots of readers our age. and I suppose I wrote it for an open interpretation
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You offer both in abundance, Ivor, and you are offered both in abundance. From me. From the majority of us here.
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Thanks Kelvin, I truly appreciate your kind words, I’ve been going through a couple of Black Dog days. 🤐
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Me too, my friend. And those days easily blacken into weeks. Sigh. Keep your chin up and your pen down… down on the paper. Love all your stuff. So so gracefully penned.
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