Beyond The Trapdoor

I’ve been there so often

I’ve lost my fear, gone, forgotten

The darkest abyss

Under a cobblestone crest

Opening into a gloomy manhole

Trapdoor to the soul

 

Below the floor

My elbows do score

Over dried out soil

Beneath sticky cobweb curtains

Fingernails claw my way

Toes pushing against crumbled clay

 

No space, dusty tears

No air, dirt I chew

Shouldering under bearers

Squeezing, I burst through

I’m here, there’s a job to do

I begin searching for you

 

Ivor Steven (c)  2018

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Hi, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm a retired, part-time plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for 18 months, and writing poems for nearly 18 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

55 thoughts on “Beyond The Trapdoor”

    1. Thank you Sameera, the poem is a mixture of the realities of working and crawling under a floor, with the surreal feeling of darkness when your loved one dies, and I’ve actually experienced these thoughts while laying under a floor working, and it’s emotionally a weird feeling….

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      1. I understand Ivor. 🙂
        I can feel pain in lines. From deepest loss comes the greatest poetry. ❤ Life is such and we need to embrace the way it is. 😉

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    1. I’ve a fear of getting stuck under the house, and I had a fear of losing Carole, so I tied them together in the poem, and actually to help when I’m feeling a bit panicky under the house, I think of Carole, …

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    1. Thank you Ali, I’m so pleased you liked these two lines, I had a jumble of words trying to explain my confinement, and eventually I honed them down to these simplest of phrases, and I’m happy I captured the feeling. 😊

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