I’ve been on the run for weeks
Heading towards the Great Wall
From atop this steep hill
My nose tells me, I’m close
And I smell that distinctive sage aroma
Knowing, the sage bush is nearby
At the gateway to guard tower twelve
My old bones shake and shiver
The Mongolians are closing quickly
Spears and arrows aquiver
Fear grips me, and I crawl low
Fingers grasping the granite, block after block
Frightened, I’m too scared to fall
Onto the cold sharp rocks below
I clamber higher, step after step
Finally, there above me
The flowering sage bush
Mauve blooms bowing in the breeze
My chest sighs and heaves
I clear my lungs, and scream
Soon I’ll be free, as I see
Beyond the sage bush at guard tower twelve
The Emperor’s warriors, my reprieve
Saved, I fill the RoyalΒ message bag with sage leaves
Ivor Steven (c)Β 2018
Well done honourable
royal messenger for
the Emperor of the Sun.
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A message of peace
And goodwill
From the sage himself
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I’ll go tell Rosemary & Thyme.
Not forget poor Parsley.
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Like Old Friends. π
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I love it Ivor, very imaginative
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Thanks Sue, I tried to tie in the fact that I could smell my Sage bush for the first time in 4 weeks (I’m nearly better) with my fabulous experience of walking on the Great Wall, and I came up with this quaint poem, and I’m glad you think it worked OK. π
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Nice message, sweet smelling poem.
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Yes, my sage bush is here in my courtyard, and I had fun planting it in my poem on The Great Wall
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nice.
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Ivor what a lovely way to tie your trip together with home. β₯οΈ
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Yes, it’s nice that I can smell my lovely sage bush again, and for me it was obvious that it should be my saviour growing there up on the Great Wall
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This is amazing how you have brought together two worlds through your words!
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Oh! what a wonderful adventure poem! So many emotions are stirred!
And my senses are stirred, too! I can smell the sage! π
What a creative fun way to bring your exciting trip and your happiness to be back home together! π
HUGS!!! π
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I’m so pleased you saw my poem for the way it was written, and I yes I was trying to bring the two worlds together, and think it worked OK. I love the the ((hugs)) xxx xx
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This takes us there then
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I was hoping to create that olden atmosphere π
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masterful poem, stunning photo, senses ignited by the scents and the chase π
Glad you made it Ivor and that your health is improving!
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It’s been a battle(like in my poem) but well worth the extra effort that I had to put in. xx
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Good and I hope you made some new friends π
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Yes I did, and some new Ivor poetry followers !!
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lol watch that ego young man .. and why not!
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Ivor the Muse at large, unabridged….. xxx
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!!!!!!!!!!!! Bravo Ivor !!!!!!!!
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Yes the Great Wall inspired me to be brave, it was a fun write for me
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You are such a wonderful writer and poet. π
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Thanks Janette, yes I really enjoyed writing this one.
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