I dreamed of sending a letter to Greece
To Hydra, an island paradise
Where sunshine basks on clearness in the air
Shimmering upon old white villa’s at the water’s edge
Memories flood me, of a poet extraordinaire
A handsome man, leaning on his writing ledge
Composing timeless words
Legends now, we’ve all heard
The sound of his golden voice
The strumming of his distinctive guitar music
My heart would pump out tears of joy
My soul would bathe in rhythmic jubilee’s
His lyrics would deeply resonate around me
His messages were poignant, clear to see
Massaging my tortured thoughts, to be true and free
Guiding my arduous life through turbulent seas
My mentor
My saviour
A Tower Of Song, in heaven
Since 2016 November Seven
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
In our rags of light
all dressed to kill
we can catch a sight
and listen still
as his songs take flight
from that tower
upon a broken hill
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Well done David
I shall always do the Waltz
I shall always sing his tunes
His tower’s too high for me
I shall always bow to thee
Be a happy fish in his glorious sea
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Till it’s Closing Time
… and beyond.
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If it be his will
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Υour letter arrived in my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You never liked to get The letters that I sent. But now you’ve got the gist Of what my letters meant. You’re reading them again, The ones you didn’t burn. You press them to your lips, My pages of concern. I said there’d been a flood. I said there’s nothing left. I hoped that you would come. I gave you my address. Your story was so long, The plot was so intense, It took you years to cross The lines of self-defense. The wounded forms appear: The loss, the full extent; And simple kindness here, The solitude of strength. You walk into my room. You stand there at my desk, Begin your letter to The one who’s coming next.
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Oh Efi, It’s one of fav’ poems/songs by Leonard. Thank you for the words. Yes I did dream about Hydra last night. and I cried all the way through while I was writing this poem. I get so emotional, and I’m sorry I was going to mention you as my inspiration for the poem, but I was just breaking apart, so I had to stop, I really struggled to send it off, I thought it wasn’t worthy enough for Leonard……
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Ιvor i must tell you that i am so glad that i have found a man with emotions!! I really appreciate you and i really enjoy to read your thoughts!!
My purpose here is to share deeply from my soul and to learn from the other’s from their souls too….
Send you my love!!!!!
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Oh dear Efi, yes I cry at concerts, conversations with friends, and when I write. My life has made me emotional, and compassionate. Carole set me an example of grace and humility, despite her pain and suffering and she always had her everlasting smile. She taught me how life should be lived. And now I write straight from my heart, totally unabridged, I’m an unskilled writer, but every word is from my soul and I throw pieces of myself onto every line. 😊 I’m ecstatic that you like my honesty within my words. I’ve always lots of tissues on-hand and love that you understand the depth of my feelings. 😊
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IVOR when i first read your posts i realized how good person you are…. Carole was a reason to appreciate both of you!!!
I feel the same that’s why in my first comment i wrote you ..
“I feel i am at home”….
Keep writting and keep sharing your soul .. we need humans with souls…… ❤
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Thank you Efi, your kinds words comfort me xx
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Oh, your poem brought tears, Ivor. (Your word-pictures are amazing!)
And Mr. Cohen’s song brought tears. As they often do.
Beautiful post!!! 🙂
HUGS!!! 🙂
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I’m you cried 😂, I cried heaps while I was writing it,, and I in fact I was overwhelmed and had to give myself a spell. I’m so hoping my words turned out OK, I was so emotional, that I’ve no idea what my poem came out like. 😊 😊 ❤️ 💕
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sometimes music will take you tho that place, where the soul needs to scream. one of your most powerful poems Ivor, full of passion, i don’t feel the sadness, i fell so much passion
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Yes !! Gina you’ve got it exactly right, I was writing it with great passion and revere, and I was so hoping my words would come across like that, maybe the poem is not as good as I wanted it to come out, I was so full of emotion as I wrote the words and i think my thoughts and vision were a bit fuzzy and clouded……..
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oh it came out with a lot of passion, writing with a feeling does that, the rhyme and meter fall so perfectly. i could sense all you were pouring out.
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You are good for me Gina, sometimes I wish I had a close poet friend here in Geelong that I could confide in over a cup of coffee….
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and cake too? I would love that too Ivor. overlooking your picturesque town – talking poetry and songs – lovely!
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Yes cake…… and I do love a chat, …. and yes it would be lovely…… and you’re are always welcome…. my abode is small… but I can make room….
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direct flights soon☕🍰🌺
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Yes !! supposed to be starting in December ….
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Your heart and appreciation for emotion is clear Ivor. ❤️
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Carole communicated with me by being emotive, and it’s taught me to show my emotions, because underneath that’s who I am, and now I express them through my words
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It is very obvious ❤
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Lyrical
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Thank you Derrick.
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This piece is filled with so much passion ….i can feel it through..
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Yes, you’re quite right, he’s had a huge influence on my life, thank you ❤️
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Such a beautiful poem, Ivor! I’m also a Leonard Cohen fan. 🙂
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Oh that’s wonderful, I hope my words did him justice xx
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Yes they did Ivor. Lovely all round.
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Such a heartfelt, full of passion and happy kind of tears piece!
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Yes Punam, I’ll always be passionate when writing about Leonard Cohen
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Indeed Ivor!
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A lyrical way to kick off Wednesday Ivor.
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Yes, I’m always happy to write about Leonard.
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