Days were dimly full of mace
I was a seedy old scar-face
With a shredded dark heart
In need of a surgeon’s restart
My innards were slashed and torn
Stuffed with yesterdays corn
My brains were in a rotted pumpkin-head
Emptied, thrown out into the shed
Ankles shattered, with crinkled toes
I looked like a weathered scarecrow
Sirens screeched and screamed
My angels golden chariot beamed
Nurses in white, doctors in blue
They all came to my rescue
Sewed my broken heart together
My rubber soul became light as a feather
Inspired dreams were renewed
A familiar smile re-screwed
My body’s bindings restrengthened
Life revived and internally lengthened
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
I do not remember ever having heard this before Ivor. Don’t know how I could have missed it!
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Well, he’s got hundreds of songs… off his album New Skin For an Old Ceremony, 1974
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Good song Ivor
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sewed my broken heart together – that was achingly beautiful Ivor. they would have found it hard to find the correct silver thread and golden needles to do that, but you mend so wonderfully
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Oh, that’s very sweet of you Gina xx
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delightful!
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From rubber soul
to Norwegian wood
keep on ticking on
with a poem so good
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I’m happy you picked
Up my rubber soul
Melbourne cup at the pub
Plenty of frothy cheer
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I’ve been to Yucatan.
There was cerveza
and tequila
but very little rain ☔
So if you put your money
on the favourite
it may go down the drain?
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I’m dressed blue
The kings grandson will do
Smart Bart I used to say
James is the new boy
Avilius carries my dough
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I’m a life member
of the Magic Circle Club
but alas, I cannot bet
for I’m far from the Pub.
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I’m still in the pub
Horse broke Down
But I’m still going
Chatting, having fun
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Love your description, Ivor.
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On a wet track
when your horse
does flounder
don’t shoot
the barman
getting cross
across the counter.
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Very deep and revealing, Ivor.
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Thank you Calen, yes it’s one of those Ivor ones 🙄😊
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Oh. and. Aw. Such vivid word-pics, Ivor. Deep emotions. Beautiful ending.
We must see our inner and outer scars as proof we have lived, hurt, survived, and thrived.
(((HUGS)))
PS…perfect song pairing with your poem.
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Oh thank you ❤️ dear Carolyn, your endearing comments make my heart sing 😊☺️😃
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Fine imagery, Ivor
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Great poem my friend.
“Sirens screeched and screamed
My angels golden chariot beamed.”
Brilliant lines.
Enjoyed this a lot 😉
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Thank you ❤️ Fiery,
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‘They all came to my rescue
Sewed my broken heart together’, they always do, don’t they.
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And there were Beatle references just for good measure Ivor.
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😊 Yes, I’m glad you picked that one up, ☺️
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I see the beauty in theses scars Ivor.
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Thank you ❤️ for the inspiration, I loved your post. 😊
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❤ oh so many thanks 🙂
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Love this – like the story of Humpty Dumpty but tokdnbetter and with a happy ending! ❤️
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I like happy endings, and hopefully there’s a lot more to come. 😊
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Really like this one. It has a Frankensteinian feel. Reclaimed and refurbished. 😎
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Thanks Mark 😊I didn’t think of it like that, but I really like your Frankensteinian feel 😂
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Beautifully done Ivor ☺
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Thanks mate, I liked this one
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Nice,I didn’t really know it
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Its so painfully beautiful Ivor…how was your trip?
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Thank you ❤️ Mich, and China is incredible
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