I’m still going with my theme of “Life As A Carer”, with old poems I’ve not posted, on WordPress, or anywhere else before . I hope as readers you don’t mind my indulgence with these pieces.
What’s The Song Called
What’s it called, tending to one for so long
Eternally battling on, right or wrong
The advocate, always trying to be so strong
Giving his very being, through every song
What’s it called, yearning for one to belong
Living beside a finality, from here to beyond
The partner, always trying to sing along
Wrenching at his inner soul, with every sad song
What’s it called, suffering for one so long
Patience wearing away, life seems an eon
The soloist, always crying, not so strong
Fearing his lost heart, until the last song
Ivor Steven (c) 2019
Such a sad and yet, touching piece of true love. Beautiful.
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This is an old poem from years ago, that hasn’t been been published before
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You really should… It’s lovely.
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Thank you Beckie ❤️😊
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You are most welcome, friend. 😊
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A lovely poem , but if I’d written this, I would find it very difficult to look back and and have those suppressed emotions surface once more. 🙂
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Taking a trip down memory lane often opens up a newness, a depth not perceived before. Perhaps not meant to be captured till some later time when it has ripened ready for the picking and tasting.
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Nice one Ivor and I love your accompanying photo.
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Ivor, this is so well written – raw with emotion and honesty. My husband has been my caregiver for four years and I feel for him through your words.
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Oh V. J. your comment made my day, it’s so gratifying that you can associate with my poem and understand my feelings as a carer. xxx
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Life sucks at time, the only gratification being that we are seldom alone
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Beautifully touching, Ivor.
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Honest and raw words in a piece from my past, thank you Punam 🙂🤔♥️
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Indeed! My pleasure, Ivor. 😊
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Lovely my friend!!!!!!!
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yes I’m a REM fan, I love this song. I’ve a Video of them with Neil young playing guitar
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This brought tears….especially with Mr. Cocker singing in the background as I read your heart-felt poem. Once again, Ivor…such honesty of emotions and thoughts. I admire your ability to express them in your poems!
“What’s the song called?”…I think it’s called Loving Kind Willing Compassionate Carer and that describes you, Ivor!
I have been a carer…but I worry that some day I will need the care. And that scares me. None of the people I’ve cared for have been a burden on me…I was so so SO glad to be able to help and be there with/for them. But, I worry I would be a burden on someone. 😦 I’ve gotta’ do some thinking and dealing with this.
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Oh Carolyn I to worry about being a cranky old burden. I happy you think my poem is ok, it was written a long time ago when I first started penning poems. They were all hidden away in my desk for years until a close friend asked to read them. She said they were good, but sad….. That was only 10 years ago 🙄😁♥️
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I can’t see you as being cranky, ever!
I know I won’t be cranky (based on my life-long attitude and silliness), but like I said I do worry about being a burden in any way.
You are so brave, so kind, and so wonderful to share your poems…especially the oldest ones and the blood-sweat-tears ones. I struggle to share my poems like that that I’ve written. But, you encourage me to be braver!
(((HUGS)))
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I get my bravery off Carole, she was the bravest..
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/06/18/brave/
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Thank you for sharing the link!
Through your words and poems I feel like I knew Carole AND that she was such a wonderful woman! 🙂
I, too, find bravery from those who have gone down those tough roads.
(((HUGS)))
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Brave courageous and gracious that was Carole, despite her overpowering
afflictions ❤️❤️🤗🤗
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Fabulous post
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PS…How are you feeling today, Ivor?!
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Oh I had a hospital app in the morning. I did a lot of walking, and the whole day was very tiring. Had an afternoon sleep, and feeling betterer now. I’ve done my Yorkie pedal and a session of exercises. ♥️♥️🤗🤗
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Good on the walking. Understand about the very tiring.
Glad you got a sleep! And had a ride with Yorkie!
HUGS!!! 😉
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Some days I feel so tired, now I understand it’s all part of this getting fit process
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Yes, it is just part of the process.
You WILL conquer! 🙂
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A cry of anguish – and love
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I can hear your silent screams of anguish in this heart-wrenching poem, and can tell that it was written while you were caring for your lovely wife
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I so love your poetry my poetic brother 😊💛 I never tire of reading your poems, your memories, your love for Carole. You and I have a caregiver’s bond dear friend, and your Carole and my Lee are smiling down at us. I have no doubt that they, like you and I, have become good friends 😊❤
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Your words are music to my tired old ears, thank you my Tennessee Poet. I’m sure both Lee and Carole are happily looking down on us, and we will have plenty to talk about dear Walt🤗🤗❤️😊😁
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Tao.old kindred souls 😊💛
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Ivor, this blew me away! Very nice rhythm to it! ❤
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