I am also posting this poem “Silent Sky,” on “Go Dog Go Café” via the fantastic idea of “Promote Yourself Monday”.. << Click here
My morning sky is silent
An empty clear blue vent
A vast quietness
Cloudless and soundless
The world has turned mute
We cannot hear
The whales crying
We no longer see
The birds flying
We now refuse to speak
Words of peace, they’re slowly dying
My morning sky has no sun
Spent gold, overused, and undone
A grey dullness
Viewless, a hollow darkness
The world has lost sight
We no longer see
Industrious bees
We cannot hear
The animals fear
We now deny the people’s voice
Words of peace, our children’s choice
Ivor Steven (c) 2019
This has a melancholic tone. How are you feeling?
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Hi Sue, I suppose I’ve had enough of being in the hospital. They ask me to come in for a few tests, and now I’ve been here a week, and that’s another week closer to flying to America, which is only 10 weeks away now. I’m not fit enough yet and I suppose that’s worrying me a bit. I’m feeling reasonably ok Sue, but we are no closer to a solution yet 🙄🤔
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My thoughts are with you Ivor and I understand how you must be feeling 🙂
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Thank you Sue, I just have to stay a patient, patient 😉😁
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Very Clever, and yes you do! 🙂
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☺️☺️😴😴🤗
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I’ll organise a gang to spring you out of jail Ivor! Great music again.
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That would be great Peter 🎶🎶and we’ll dance to the Jail house Rock
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What’s the secret code word when I use my secret knock when we convene for the planning?
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“The Irish Are Coming”…… (from spam)
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Hahahahahahaha! I can remember that!
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Too late Colleen. We got him out while your back was turned!
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Yippee…. I’m free…..I’m free !!!
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Well, that is to be happy about!
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Melancholic and beautiful. I love melancholic poems.
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Thank you, I love putting the emotions into such works
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I can tell. Good job.
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Marvelous poem Ivor, beautifully penned. Sorry to hear you’re still not home – keeping fingers crossed for you. Hugs xx
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Thank you Lisa, and the waiting for results is frustrating xxxx
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Great post, Ivor!! Sad, that the truth is so dreary and melancholic, isn’t it! Beautifully penned, My Friend!! Hey, get well and get home, My Friend!! The hospital is no place to be!!
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I afraid our world is a sad place. Thank you
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Sad, but true, My Friend!
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Lovely poem, Ivor, and get well soon. 🙂
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Very pensive but beautifully penned. Get well soon, Ivor.
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This brings tears. It does seem the world has lost its sense AND it’s senses these days. 😦
(((HUGS)))
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I’m always thinking about our planet, it is where we live, and I like to live in a tidy and friendly environment. And song lyrics by Leonard are so powerful
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you Robert, I’m thrilled to have my poem Reblogged on your website 😁😊
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Beautifully penned, your words are very touching. Take care, enjoy being pampered. May you have a full and Speedy recovery!
Yonnie😊🙏💜
I am going to Reblog
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I’m humbly pleased that my poem is being read with such emotion and understanding, Thank you Yonnie
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You are sincerely welcome, Ivor! It is truly a pleasure!
Your Poem is very beautifully penned and heartfelt.
Yonnie😊🙏💜
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Thank you for your kindness, and I’ll send you a link for a special poem of mine, and good news, I’m going home tomorrow morning. Yeah🏡😀
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That is wonderful news!!! I am so thankful! Yes, send me the link when you get a chance. Make sure you take care and follow the doctors orders! You are certainly welcome 🙏
Yonnie🤗🙏💜
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Here is that link Yonnie
https://wp.me/p6B6QE-1sO
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Reblogged this on yonniewordpresscom and commented:
“Silent Sky” by Ivor Steven @ ivors20.wordpress.com
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Thank you Yonnie for reblogging my poem, I appreciate being featured on your wonderful site, it’s a glorious thrill for me
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You are sincerely welcome!
The pleasure is all mine!
Blessing😊🙏💜
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Brilliant piece!
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Yes Carol, I love to write about our world’s situation, and hopefully some words help. 😉🙄📝
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I think so. I think they do. X 😗
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It’s nice to think so Carol, thank you 🤔❤️📝
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