An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Unnamed; Maybe ?…. Beyond A Blue Sky……… Or…….. Goodbye Blue Sky…..
I’m quite baffled as to what title I should give my little poem below. The “Weekly Word Prompt” for this week is : Baffling << Click on Baffling. I’ve a few baffling ideas, but nothing that I’m happy with, maybe you wonderful readers could come up with a suitable Title,Ā ??
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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27 thoughts on “Unnamed; Maybe ?…. Beyond A Blue Sky……… Or…….. Goodbye Blue Sky…..”
Conundrum!
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Eyeballing! š
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Differences?
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Perhaps you’ve already said it…Baffling…
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Thank you Claudia, I dreamt of a couple of titles during the night, I’ll pencil them down soon, when I get up, and see what they look like šš¤
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I think the closing line is a good title, Ivor.
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Different Views?
but unnamed is ok too … beautifully said in so few words, and apt pic!
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“We Don’t” ?
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I just put those names up this morning, after dreaming last night, I actually posted hours 8 ago š
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Oh our crazy different time zones š
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Yes I agree, but 6 weeks and 6 days, I’ll be there š½š
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What did you decide on?
I think “Baffling”, because it explains what those 4 things have in common. š
HUGS!!! š
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I like that Carolyn, maybe, Baffling Sky’s Say Goodbye
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How about “Skies Eyes” ???
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Good one Beckie šš
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Thanks. š
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You Me ( We )
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That’s got a ring to it.
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š«š
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Beautifully written Ivor you definitely have captured the essence of the word of the week with the many Life Shifts within a few short lines.
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Thank you Yonnie, I like to link my words to form a poem of meaning and I appreciate your thoughtful comments šš
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Ivor it is wonderful! You are most welcome! The pleasure is all mine! ššššø
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I love your reflections, Ivor.
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Thank you Punam…..
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My pleasure …
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Love this one Ivor! Well done you! ā¤
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Yes one of those small good ones šš¤
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