I’m under a dome, inside a maze
A giant steel worm farm
Crawling with thousands of ants
Bugs of all shapes and forms
Some are dazed, dumbfounded like me
Others stride out bold and carefree
Seeking their worm’s tunnel
Walking down an endless funnel
Where the guzzling worms stop and go
Slurping ants up, riding to and fro
Oh no, which steel worm to catch
Before the grinding halt, to hatch
Unfazed, into a mysterious belly I jump
The giant worm rattles at every bump
Rolling through underground passages
And all the ants are reading messages
I quietly ask one, “where do I get off this worm”
Ah, “You’re in the wrong tunnel “, I’m lost !!
Ivor Steven (c) 2019
Such an interesting and innovative poem – love this Ivor :O) x
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Thank you Lisa, oh the underground world here in NY is amazing. 🚇🗽🤗
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Sounds like you’re having great fun :O) x
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I agree with ‘All About Life’ Very different to your usual style!
Hope the day was a good one and you enjoyed the meet up with your cousins. 🙂
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My day was extraordinary, thank you Sue 🤗💜
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very nice ivor! I like this! ❤
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My underground impression 🤗🚇
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I agree with the comments about innovation, Ivor
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Thank you Derrick !!
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nice analogy for train travel Ivor, well done … met up with those special people yet?
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Yes !!, my cousins Ken & Terry (fem) came in from Philadelphia yesterday to meet me, incredible, !! If you’ve Instagram, look me up on, ivors20 , for plenty of pic’s 😊😉
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WP is more than enough for me Ivor, I’ll hear about it all when you find time to post … meanwhile forget about us and just enjoy, plenty of time to share when you get home!
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This is my favorite of yours, Ivor! Well done! Amusing and insightful! And different.
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Thank you Robert, I am really struggling with the moles
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Sounds like you’re having great fun Ivor. Lovely image of life underground with everyone bustling about and great music to accompany.
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I’m having fun, but today was too cold for me. And I’m glad you liked David France’s music, he’s a fav’ of mine
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Welcome to NYC! Great piece!
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It’s very cold here today 😂☺️
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Yeah, it’s pretty raw and disgusting. I feeled compelled to apologize for this awful weather. LOL!
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I was actually shivering this afternoon, but I’m going to Philadelphia tomorrow, it’s bound to be warmer there 😊🙄💜
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I certainly hope for your sake it is. It’s not that much further from where I am. It’s approximately 2-3 hours from me.
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Ohh, the NYC underground (and the London one, for that matter) is a beast, Ivor.. I feel your pain, but you’ve expressed it wonderfully! It is pretty incredible though, too, the speed you can get across Manhattan is amazing! How much longer do you have there? I know you’ve probably got it pretty much planned out, but if you’re still there tomorrow night, there’s a fantastic blues jam in Greenwich Village, where some of our lovely NYC friends play. There are some big names that play in the blues circuit there, & the music & musicianship is top notch! All sorts of people turn up with their instruments, one of the regulars, on keys, played at Woodstock with Country Joe & The Fish. I can give you more information if you’re still there & interested 😊
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Oh Debbie I’m leaving for Philadelphia 12 noon tomorrow,… That sort of night would’ve been fantastic for me.
Haha, I never really handled those steel wormy beast at all. Definitely still a boy from Geelong.
I’m so looking forward to my time with my Philadelphia relatives..
Cousins Ken and Terry (fem) came into New York, to see me, it was incredible, I cried a little bit,.. but that’s Ivor….
🤗🤗☺️
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Aww, I know you said you weren’t in NY for many days, so thought you might’ve been moving on, never mind, Ivor, was just a thought. But your next adventures are about to begin..how exciting! How lovely that they came to see you, they must be just as excited as you are! Have a safe trip to Philly & a fantastic time getting to know & spending quality time together! ☺️
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Thank you Debbie for thinking of me, very kind of you.
Really the whole adventure was about seeing my cousins and my special niece Kerri, and I just threw in New York to have a look….
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That’s ok, Ivor, I hope you’re adventure is getting better day by day..have fun! 😄
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Worms and ants and Poor Ivor! 😉 Oh my! 😮
Love the images in your poem!
I hope you’re having fun! 😀
What’s next on your agenda?!
HUGS!!! no bugs!!! 😛
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Yes, the giant worms bugged me all weekend.
I’m off to Philadelphia at noon on Monday, so shower, breakfast and pack my bags, then it will be time to get a taxi(no worm) to Pen station !!
Plenty of hugs in Philadelphia 🤗🤗🤗🙄💜
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Delightful poetry 😃👍
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