I went to my favourite lunch-spot today, the Moorabool Valley Chocolate Cafe. I have not walked that far (the weather has been dismal), since I’ve been home from my trip to Philadelphia. Surprisingly I handled the long walk reasonably well. Then I sat down for a coffee and a piece of tasty blue-berry cheese cake. The winter sun was gorgeous, out on the outdoor balcony, and I happily “observed” a pair of Weebill birds, as I continued to write this poem(Below). Also attached, a few photos from my pleasant afternoon observations……
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Black Snow Thaws In The Winter Sun
I’ve no more secret words of sorrow
Only old lines I’ve borrowed
I found them in a poet’s dusty booklet
The pages were tattered, like grandma’s cookbook
Torn recipes, out of last century’s Gideon’s bible
Of a tongue, ancient and tribal
Shadowy scriptures that now appear outdated
Erased from my sacred tablet
Years of love and dreams desecrated
Thrown away, but prudently not wasted
My road ahead is now cleared of black snow
The night is not always black, you know ?
Ivor Steven (c) June 2019
This is wonderful, Ivor. “The night is not always black, you know ?”…so true!
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It was a lovely place to be writing a poem
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The beauty of your poem is testimony to that!
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glad that you made it there and love that the black snow disappears – great poem
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Yes , Such a pleasant place to writing a poem….
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A nice positive touch
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In beautiful surroundings, definitely a big plus….
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That was lovely Ivor and I’m so glad you managed the walk and gave yourself a well-earned treat! 🙂
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It was nice to know that my fitness is still improved Sue 😁🤗
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Love this Ivor.
The cheese cake was obviously very tasty, you didn’t leave any for the birds!
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They got the leftover creamy bits ☺️
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I loved your post about your walk…this is usually like a pick-me-up. The poem, outstanding. Thanks for sharing it made my day. E,
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Thank you E. It was a glorious day, and lovely to be able to get out and have a walk, and I think my poem was a suitably positive reflection of my thoughts 💭🤔
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Just beautiful, Ivor. I enjoyed your pre-story too. The Weebills trusted your gentle presence. ♥.
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They certainly did…. they were gorgeous…
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Thank you for sharing your gorgeous new friends. 🙂 ♥.
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They were very cute…
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=) SO cute! ♥.
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I so enjoyed this. What a wonderful experience to sit in just the right place and find just the right words! Mona
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I was very fortunate Mona….
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A walk, a treat, and poetry. You are living well Ivor.
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Yes Colleen, The day was truly a good one, hopefully my pic’s did it justice xx
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I think they did!!
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While seeping a cup of hot coffee, eating a delicious blueberry cheese cake and…writing! What more could one ask?
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Yes Arlene it was truly a magic day…… xx
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You’re so right! It’s not! 🙂
I love flow of this poem! You were inspired by your surroundings and how you felt in them! Your photos tell the story of a beautiful day, and sweet memories made! 🙂
How nice of you to share your spoon with the little birdie! 😉
HUGS!!! 🙂
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The little birds fluttering on my table, was truly a beautiful plece of my day, and help me create the words of my soulful but happy ending poem
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It’s lovely to see a photo of the poet at work. I only wish i could have had that hot chocolate. 🙂
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Thank you for sharing your positivity. Love the last line!
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Thank you, I was hoping that the last 2 line’s didn’t look out place in the poem 😊
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I thought the last 2 lines were a perfect finale. 🙂
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That’s truly nice to know… my self doubts were creeping in……
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I love that birds are safe with you. And I love your poem. 💙
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Thank you, they were a fascinating interlude into my peaceful coffee break
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amazing ivor! Well done! well written!
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Oh Carol, thank you for your heart warming comments
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Great outing, optimistic outcome 🙂
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I think my writings have been positive lately. thank you Kate
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they always are Ivor, just that your grief tears you apart …
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You’re a very understanding soul Kate…. xx
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I try …
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Beautiful music video – I watched it 3 times. Just gorgeous.
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Thank you Jadi, I really didn’t know much ago ‘The National’ band, just a nice to come across on my YouTube searches……
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Blueberry Cheesecake, sounds interesting. Sounds like a wonderful time.
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