Haiku: Cold Rain
Time’s, I played in rain
Today I worked in the cold
Wet and shivering
Autumn’s fat rain drops
Have lost their warmth and softness
Winter’s hard as ice
Ivor Steven (c) July 2019
Cold Rain
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
Ivor,
One of my favorite songs but I’ve heard it played by ‘The Piano Guys’. This one is 👍👍
The haiku is powerful.
Have a peaceful weekend
Isadora 😎
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Thank you Isadora, I’m working my backwards through my comments. The poem above the sunflower was, “It’s Just A Little Dream”, it was published by the ‘Drabble’ magazine, and they supplied the picture..
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Its a bleak icy day here today too…. was making me pretty low till I got out amongst people. Hugs xoox
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Yes, I’ve gone out too, gone to my local footy game, people to meet, and lots of friendly chats.
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I always like getting around people, footy sounds a great way to spend a wintery Saturday.
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Another one I like. Hope you didn’t stay out in the cold too long 🙂
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Sorry Sue, I’m tired chat laterer, 😴😴
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Wonderful rain haiku, Ivor! I can feel the wet and cold!
I’ve always loved rain! Some people get depressed on rainy days…but those days actually bring me joy. I think I am akin to the rain…probably a cousin! 😉 🙂
Stay warm and safe!
HUGS!!!
🌞 🌞 🌞
PS…I love Simply Three and that Rain vid is a favorite!
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Thank you Carolyn, no long reply tonight, sorry, I’m tired again and going to sleep ((hugs))
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Two good ones
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Wonderfully penned, my friend. Keep warm and safe. 😊
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. I’m warm Beckie, in bed, snug as a bug, in a rug
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That’s always a good place to be! LOL!
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Truly lovely, Ivor! The video is a perfect compliment to your poem.
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I enjoy finding a piece of music that goes with my poem
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It’s a very nice touch, Ivor. 😉
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Lovely haiku, and great music to accompany!
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Thank you Peter.
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But different feelings.
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Sorry, Ivor. Message incomplete. Love the difference between work and play in the rain. Same rain, but different emotions.
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