Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: Tuesday, June 16, 2020
Today’s prompt: Write a piece of prose around the word: “sirens”, and I’m afraid that this poem I wrote 4 hours ago, actually turned into reality for me me at noon today… Luckily I’m now back home from hospital and I’m ok…
Saved By The Bell
Within my dark maze
I could hear a loud siren
In my rigid daze
I am a rock, I am an island
Laying length-ways
Prone on the floor
A bang rang in my subconscious haze
And smashing through the door
They came to rescue me
Greeted by my teary gaze
I was vaguely all at sea
And unable to cry g’day
I had fallen off my cloud
Into a vacant water-well
Covered by a warm grey shroud
Oblivious to those sirens and bells
Ivor Steven (c) June 2020
Good one Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje….. one of those reoccurring dreams that I have…..
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Sounds ominous
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So sad
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That was a sad frightening day for me….I’m afraid the prompt rang the bell….. xx
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I get that –
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This is both sad and beautiful. You’ve got a perfect photo to match those wonderful words too!
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Thank you for your kind comments, and actually after you read poem, my words turned into reality… an had to come and take me hospital…. luckily things are ok… and I’m now home resting… I’ve updated my poem a little to capture my day… 😊
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Very good. But makes me w
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Ack! Makes me worry about you! 💜💜
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A poem that reflects your feelings, or was it just that dream? Lovely, Ivor.
Following a few days off from blogging I am attempting to catch up with my reading. 🙂
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It’s reoccurring memories from back then….
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Oh, my! What a scary dream!
Are you okay?
The cares of the day often become the tough dreams of the night.
(((HUGS)))
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The dream become a reality today, I’ve spent the day here in hospital, but everything has checked out ok. So I’m going now, 🏥😊👌
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Oh, gosh! 😦 I’m sorry to hear this! 😦
Glad all checked out okay! 🙂
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Yes I’m home now….. One scary day… Now to bed…. 🛌💤😴😊
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Good poem and I am pleased you were saved
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Thank you Derrick, yes I’m back home, after the relevant scans turned out OK… phew.. 😏
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Excellent poem and I’m glad you’re okay, Ivor. 🌻 🌞
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Thank you for your kind concern, I’m lucky to be home so soon, I I’ll be resting for few days.. 😊🛌😴
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Take care!
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Praying for your complete recovery, Ivor.
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Thank you Rhen, i have these episodes, and with rest, I’m usually ok…. It’s was a good start to be home so soon.. the scans were all ok… 😊☺
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Oh I’m glad, thanks for telling me, Ivor–I’m such a fretter!!
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A beautiful piece. Are you sure you’re okay now??? Thank you for sharing this with us
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I’m resting well, went to bed at 7.00 pm,… It’s now 3.00am, and I’m going back to sleep… the episode made me very tired. 😊😴💤. but I’m feeling ok considering… 😊🛌
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I am glad to hear this. You must be exhausted. I wish you a good recovery and soon. 😊❤
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Wow,.. It’s nearly 8.00am,.. that means I’ve had 13 hours sleep… 🛌😊💙🌏
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Oh good! That is wonderful to hear! I hope you feel rested. I hope you are being watched over. Keep up the great work of resting and of course fluid intake. Many blessings and get better soon. I’m glad you are ok and on the mend.🙂
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Yes.. about to get up and have breakfast, and I’ll see how I cope with my day… 💙🌏😊
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Good. Enjoy your breakfast and your day. And goodnight from me 🌍🌅
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Good nite…I appreciate your king concern….thank you…xx
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🙂
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Ivor, I’m so glad you’re okay. *hugs* ♥.
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Yes I’m ok… but i’ve the stuffing knocked out of me, ,… it’s very confusing and disappointing for me….. xx
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*hugs* I’m so sorry Ivor! ♥.
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Oh my goodness! Here I am just catching up…so glad to hear you were able to get help and everything checked out OK. Please, please take care, dear man!! Maybe next time write about winning a million dollars and have that come true…
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Thank you for your loving concern Irma…. yes I’m home and resting….xx
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