My poem is in response to a Halloween Prompt from Ingrid, at “Experiments In Fiction”, you can visit the Prompt and her site by clicking on this link >> https://experimentsinfiction.com/2020/10/24/eif-poetry-challenge-8-halloween-special/
The Reincarnation of a Pumpkin
My locked bubble is about to go boom
A year I’ve been a stranger in my own tomb
Under a pumpkin lid, hiding my gloom
Where my world was a rotting cave of doom
Now these orange walls are my life-giving womb
Being reborn like a smiling old groom
I’m breaking away from the master’s dead blooms
Escaping on the green witch’s magical broom
Flying over the full moon of autumn
Where I’ll be able to wear my mask and costume
Hidden under my orange Kaftan from Khartoum
And I’ll invade the newsrooms, and all the children’s bedrooms
Ivor Steven (c) October 2020
Thank you for your entry, Ivor – I love your haunting take on the prompt! π
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Thank you so much for your entry, Ivor π sorry if Iβm commenting twice – my first comment disappeared π»
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Yes.. I’ve just found both of your comments in my trash folder… hopefully now that I’ve replied to your comments, they won’t end up in trash again…
and thank you Ingrid, i’m happy the way it turned out…. sometimes a spontaneous little poem can turn out ok.. there was a couple of spelling mistakes with the I put on your site, but I corrected them here on my post…ππ
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Ivor, I am glad you were able to be reborn and get out of that lousy pumpkin! I’d like to see you in that costume. an orange kaftan from Khartoum, and flying over the autumn moon on the green witch’s magical broom. π Charming piece of fantasy! Stay well and happy!
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Thank you Cheryl, yes a bit of Halloween fun.. π
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Very seasonal and apt poem
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Thank you Sadje ππ²π
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Youβre welcome
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A good poem and a nice song too ππ€
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Thank you for you kind words..π
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Love the orange caftan
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Ah… I haven’t got it anymore Beth…
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Time to get a new one
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Good fun, Ivor
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Yes indeed Derrick… I’m on the pumpkins side…
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I don’t know whether to be halloween fright or halloween delight! π
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That’s Halloween ππ»π
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Very beautifully and delightfully evoked π§‘π§‘π§‘
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Thank you d.a., a bit of Halloween fun ππ
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You’re welcome π β€
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Delightful and apt for the season, Ivor!
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Thank you Eugenia ππ»π
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Oh, I love your Halloween poem π
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Thank you Sue, yes I’m on the side of the chopped up pumpkins ππβΊ
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Wonderful! Perfect poem for the season!
We grew pumpkins a few times…the first time by accident. (Funny story) I like to see them grow. I like to display them. I like to cook with them.
HUGS!!! π
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Thank you, I’m on the pumpkins side., ππ€ππ
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Me, too! π
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Yeah !!
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Nice take on the prompt, I like the video π·οΈπΈοΈ
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Thank you for your being on the pumpkins
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Awesome poetry Ivor! Well done on it! β€
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Oh, this is Halloween poem, πππ
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