I bought a clock yesterday, to hang under my verandah today. Now time is close at hand, giving me notice of her demands… This poem is a repost from this Time last year.
Time Needs No Commands
The white moon has fallen late
A new daytime awaits
Rollover out of dream time
Rollover to the edge of time
Leave midnightβs caressing lullaby
And discover the blue curtain sky
Itβs time to stretch and yawn
Itβs time to feel the misty dawn
Stand in front of timeβs open hands
Stand stoically upon timeβs ancient landβs
The cloudy skies of daylight do fly
As moments of time flow swiftly by
Time moves on, needing no command
The sands of time, wait for no man
Ivor Steven (c) October 2020
Lovely poem, Ivor. Beautiful rhymes and images. β€ True that time waits for no man. π
All the best! Cheryl
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Thanks Cheryl…haha.. time seems to be on my side at the moment π°βππ
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I love the clock!
What a great poem – Time, We give it. We waste it, We owe it and We live it. Let us hope we continue to do what we’ve always done best.π
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Yes … time is there for us to use wisely…ππ
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so true about time, and i love the clock!
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Thanks Beth, Yeah, the clock was a great find at the MS op shop for just $4.00
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a pretty rhyming insightful poem Ivor … love your old clock, mine is a tiny old one a neighbour passed on π
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Thanks Kate, the clock was a great find at the MS shop yesterday for only $4.00…
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what a treasure, and it was in working order? I had to pay to get a new mechanism on mine π
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It was still in it’s new packaging, all I had to do was buy a battery…ππ
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wow! Mine was well used and long past it’s use by date so I gave it new life π
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Mine didn’t even need dusting… I just happened to be in the right spot at the right “time”, as lady at the counter said the clock had just come that morning…. ππ
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so altho it looks old it’s brand new!
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Yeah, a rustic style.. ππ
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cheat! I was totally sucked in π¦
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I really love how your poem always rhyme. Wonderful
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Thank you Sadje, sometimes the rhyme works ok
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Youβre welcome!
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So true, and so well put π
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Thank you ing
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Thank you Ingrid, time is a fascinating subject ππβ
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Sound thoughts
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I love this poem, Ivor, and what a cool clock!
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Thank you, the clock was a great find at the MS shop πππ
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Most welcome! π
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GREAT clock! Love it’s antique-y look! It’s large and in charge…I could see it across the room. π
GREAT poem! Your poem is truth and I love it’s rhyme-y flow! It was fun to read out loud! π
I try not to just spend time…I try to invest in it by the things I do, the things I say, the ways I try to help others, etc.
GREAT song! That song always touches me deeply.
(((HUGS)))
PS…Now I’m thinking of a fav quote…
βWe live in deeds, not years; in thoughts, not breaths; in feelings, not in figures on a dial. We should count time by heart throbs. He most lives who thinks most, feels the noblest, acts the best.β – Aristotle
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Love the Quote Carolyn, and the clock was from the MS shop, and is fondly on display in my writing haven.. ((Hugs))…
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Love this ivor! Great poetry man! β€
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Thank you Carol, time is on side
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