For thirty years
We fought off the fears
We survived the drowning tears
We always did
Your every extra day
Was a wondrous array
We pursued life’s ballet
We always did
Your olive eyes always smiled
We promised each other an emerald isle
We danced across life’s blackened tiles
We journeyed through time’s gruelling miles
We lived a grateful and humble lifestyle
We always did
The story is engraved
Under my eyelids
“We’ll Make It Through”, by Ray LaMontagne
Had our share of the pain
Of the clouds, and the rain
Lean on me
And I’ll lean on you
And together, we’ll get through
We always do
We always do
I know you’re scared ’cause
You can’t see the light
You toss and turn through the night
Holdin’ me
And I’m holdin’ you
And together, we’ll get through
We always do
We always do
We always do
Where do you go, when there’s no road to follow?
Faces look hollow, only strangers to you, now
Where do you turn, when this livin’ starts to burn through
Layers that you learned wrap around your heart somehow
I turn to you
I always do
I always do
I turn to you
I know you’re scared
Can’t see the light
Gotta believe it’s gonna be alright
Lean on me
And I’ll lean on you
And together, we’ll get through
We always do
We always do
We always do
We’ll make it through
We always do
We always do
Ivor Steven (c) January 2021
Oh Ivor this is such a beautiful poem. Very moving.
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Thank you Sadje, and working on this piece for couple of days…. I wasn’t about the wording… so it’s very pleasing to see your lovely comments
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Youโre always welcome!
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I love this poem Ivor it’s very moving ๐๐
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Thank you Willow… and a very moving piece for me too..๐๐
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I could see that your words told the whole story ๐๐๐
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โค๏ธ
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Another lovely tribute
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I’ve been working on the piece for a couple of days… but in the end I posted the poem anyhow…
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Such a beautiful love story
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Thank you Beth.. Yes indeed soโคโค
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Aww! Such a beautiful, heartwarming piece on a lifetime commitment.
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Thank you Punam… a piece I wrote due to the deep memories occurring at this time of year… so I posted this poem… my soul needed to release the words etched under my eyelids… I suppose the poem turned out ok.. ๐ค
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It turned out to be a real gem! You are welcome. ๐
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Beautiful words filled with the love you and Carole shared, the hopes and dreams you once had. You were both bathed in the Light and Love through your life’s hardships, the unfairness of the world and yet Carole and you rose above everything. Your heartache is so evident as you bear your journey on Earth alone but yet you are surrounded constantly with Carole’s love. Blessed in many ways. If feel the ache in your soul it pains me too.
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Your Wedding flower Violets – the Faerie Bouquet
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Yes indeed so ๐๐๐๐๐
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Thank you Nanette for your kind and thoughtful words, your understanding of the aches within my soul truly warms heart.. โค๐๐๐
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My pleasure.
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Thank you for telling your story. โค๏ธ
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Pass the tissues, please.
This is beautiful and touches the heart and the soul. Such a lovely telling of the love story of Carole ๐ and Ivor ๐
I know it is impossibly painful to not have her with you each day. But we know she is still with you in heart, spirit, memories, your writings, ETC. ๐
(((HUGS)))
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Thank you Carolyn…. and yes a 2 tissue-box poem, when I was write this piece … but I persisted with my train of thoughts, and came up with these words…. I hope the story worked ok… ((Hugs))
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It worked wonderfully! The depth of emotion one feels while reading it is amazing.
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Your kind words please me greatly Carolyn.. ๐
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Beautiful poem. the song lyrics and the song really really lovely. Healing and comforting. Beautiful post. Thank you.
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These sort of nostalgic piece are difficult for me to write… I’m pleased you liked the format…
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Yes, I can image. Certain times of the years can make the heart and tears release. I think it is good for the Soul. Even if it aches the heart. It part of the process. I guess ๐๐
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Image = imagine
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Yes.. originally the main reason I began writing 20 years ago, therapeutically my poems have been of great benefit to me. ๐๐๐
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Carole lives on in your beautiful, treasured memories, so beautifully expressed! โค Lovely violets, such a sweet reminder! Lovely poem, heartfelt and nostalgic, Ivor! โค Take care.
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Thank you Cheryl, every now and then one these nostalgic poem’s tip-toe out of my soul… the words fall from my quill, and magically the words become a poem… ๐๐
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Beautiful poem โค๏ธ
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Thank you kindly ๐
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Ivor! Again you’ve brought me to tears – what a lovely tribute, but the last two lines: our story is engraved under my eyelids…oh my goodness! It makes want to pull open my husbands eyelids and see if loves me as much.
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OMG.. don’t do that, you’ll give him a hell of a fright…. and don’t worry about the tears… when I write these nostalgic poems,.. I rate them the by how many boxes of tissues to finish the poem… this was a good one at nearly 3 boxes !!
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Loved the last two lines. Touching.
Happy and Healthy New Year!
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Thank you Kritika, and hope you have had a safe a happy new year too..
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My pleasure ๐
It was good. Thank you kindly ๐
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Beautifully evoked ๐๐
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Thank you d.a.
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You’re very welcome indeed
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Ivor, you’ve been on a “bravo” poetic trek lately! Another superb piece, my friend. ๐งก ๐ ๐
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Thank you Eugenia, maybe it’s the weather. .. summer does agree with me… ๐๐๐
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And a beautiful way to always visit Ivor. ๐
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Thank you Colleen.. ๐๐
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You’re welcome Ivor.
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