For every word
There is a breathe
In every breathe
Hurt and love dwell
Exhale hate
Inhale hope
See beyond the telescope
Hear that ringing bell
The universe is one living cell
An embryoโs brittle eggshell
Ivor Steven (c) March 2021
For every word
There is a breathe
In every breathe
Hurt and love dwell
Exhale hate
Inhale hope
See beyond the telescope
Hear that ringing bell
The universe is one living cell
An embryoโs brittle eggshell
Ivor Steven (c) March 2021
I love your poetry. There is so much meaning and positivity to your words. I didn’t think I liked Pink Floyd but I really enjoyed this video. I’ll have to take another look at this group.
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Thank you for understanding my little poem, I am not sure myself, … we are the air we breathe, and we all breathe within this one bubble, called the “Universe”, and then beyond our universe .. yep.. many more universe’s.
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love your poem and the song
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Thanks Beth
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Love this poem, Ivor! โค Beautiful and meaningful. Music is nice too. Have a great week!
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Thanks Cheryl… It’s getting a bit cooler here, but I’ve my brother’s little doggie for 2 so she will keep me busy…
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So beautifully said Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje, a few words that say a lot
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Indeed! Youโre welcome ๐
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Very well done, Ivor
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Thank you Derrick… I appreciate your kind comment…
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Your poem is fabulous, Ivor…very powerful!
(((HUGS))) ๐
PS…I always enjoy me some Pink Floyd! ๐
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I was pleased with this poem Carolyn, and we can never go wrong having a Pink Floyd song… ((hugs))… and whoops I’m tiring quickly again tonight… I’ve really been on a high since the start of Feb’…
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Good morning, Ivor! I hope you have a wonderful day!!! ๐
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Thank you, I’ll having fun tending to little old Tina
https://1drv.ms/u/s!Asumt4cZ9A65hNwYgNUcN-zgD0cPJQ?e=Z2WZJC
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AW!!!! What a little cutie!!! ๐ Give her some gentle PATS and RUBS for me!!! ๐
(((HUGS)))
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They will be very gentle pats, she’s nearly 15, old enough to be Coop’s grandmother… Little Tina needs a bit of extra care, but softie Ivor is coping ok… She enjoyed her outing to the Box Office Cafรฉ, and has been sound asleep (snoring loudly) since we got home ๐๐ด๐ถ
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You will be a good safe place for her to be herself. ๐
Well…Coop is 12, so he’s not far behind her in age.
Right now he’s sleeping at my feet and snoring loudly.
He and Little Tina would get a long great! ๐
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Tina is a quiet one, and barks at a bird in my courtyard… I didn’t realize Coops was 12.. ๐โบ
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Coop only barks when the doorbell rings or he hears a noise he is not familiar with. He is a quiet one, too. ๐
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Haha… then they’ll be perfect for each other… oh damn these ‘covid’ travel restrictions.. Tina agreed .. ๐ถ woof, woof
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โExhale hate/Inhale hopeโ – such an important message! Namaste ๐
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The way we breathe our words is important…
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Beautiful poem, Ivor! Pink Floyd is one of my favorite groups.
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You can never go wrong with Pink Floyd’s music, and they definitely suited my intriguing little poem here ๐๐ค
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I agree and yes, they were perfectly suited for your poem. ๐
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This is a beautiful piece Ivoy. Really enjoyed it.
My friend you received many compliments on the Youtube video. Please, feel free to respond to the accolades. I will approve your messages.
On another note, will it be okay for me to mention your book again on the week of the release date? Let me know.
Have a great week.
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I shall go over and do so Drew… wow I’ve been busy… I’m pleased with little poem, …
You are more than welcome to mention my book on your fabulous site Drew.. thank you my friend…
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Ivor, sorry I misspelled your name. Yeah, I really want to help you with your book so I want to repeat that message.
Have a great week.
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Thanks for your support Drew, and you promoting my book means a lot to me, ๐๐
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My pleasure
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An interesting concept…
The universe is one living cell
An embryoโs brittle eggshell
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Thanks Dwight, words and thoughts Dwight, that go thump in the night… ๐
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We get them whenever we can… or lose them forever!
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such a beautiful poem!
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Thank you for reading and commenting ๐
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