G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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Whoops ..sorry Nick…getting my comments mixed up .. haha.. it’s not the first time .. and will not be the last time … tiredness and age are my ongoing excuses…
Thanks Ingrid … a dual meaning poem that I sometimes write… here I think about our planets ailing future …. while I ponder my life’s inevitable finality
Lovely poem, Ivor… beautiful rhymes and near-rhymes. Your poem is so deep and filled with meaning! Your love of the environment glows throughout, and the ending verse is a touching tribute to Carole.
I often wish we could leave a better world behind for future generations. That, too, seems to be a theme of the poem. ❤ Take care.
mournfully sad as we destroy our own environment!
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yes it truly is… like committing suicide
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yes it’s surely a slow form of suicide and requires great detachment or much cynical greed to continue to do something we know is so wrong!
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I think greed is our main problem..
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Some amazing rhymes and half rhymes here, Ivor!
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Thank you Pragalbha
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Bless you! 🙂
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Whoops ..sorry Nick…getting my comments mixed up .. haha.. it’s not the first time .. and will not be the last time … tiredness and age are my ongoing excuses…
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I thought you meant Pragalbha, in my ignorance, was a form of poetry 🙂
…which, in a way, it is.
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Love how you ended this.
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Thanks Drew… yes a reference back the my girl…
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Very interesting and beautiful!!
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Contemplating life… the planets and mine… a dual meaning poem…
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Yes I couldn’t find better words to respond, enjoyed it very much!
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breaks my heart with how we treat the earth
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Despite all of our so called superior knowledge we have failed mother earth and her animal kingdom…
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A beautiful poem Ivor
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Thank you Sadje, and we need to look after our beautiful planet better.. 😊🌏
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Indeed.
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I love the subtle hint of a rhyme in these lines:
‘Illuminating my horizon’s promised forest
And I hear a hallelujah chorus’
– great new poem, Ivor!
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Thanks Ingrid … a dual meaning poem that I sometimes write… here I think about our planets ailing future …. while I ponder my life’s inevitable finality
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A powerful, poignant poem…but brings thoughts of hope and encouragement…and the work we all need to put in will be worth it.
(((HUGS)))
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Thank you Carolyn… yes one of my “save the planet” pieces, but also can be interpreted as a poem about my inevitable finality journey.. 😀🤨😃
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Powerful work. Ivor. We all get our comments muddled at times.
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An apt and powerful piece, Ivor! Lovely memorable finale. 🌹
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Thank you Eugenia, my mind has been abuzz lately… even I am tired, my words are still flowing. 🙄😴
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Most welcome, Ivor, and I know the feeling.
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Beautiful 💜
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Thank you 🌏😊
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💜💜💜🦋🦋
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I wonder if we’ll ever get it right. 🙂
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Always too much greed
Killing nature’s seeds
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So true. 🙂
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Superbly evoked profound poetry
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Thank you d.a.
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You are most welcome 🌺🌹🌺
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Really beautiful!!
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Thank you for reading and commenting..😀
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Lovely poem, Ivor… beautiful rhymes and near-rhymes. Your poem is so deep and filled with meaning! Your love of the environment glows throughout, and the ending verse is a touching tribute to Carole.
I often wish we could leave a better world behind for future generations. That, too, seems to be a theme of the poem. ❤ Take care.
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Yes to leave our world a better place for our next generation should be our main priority… that is always my hope.. to leave something behind.. 💙🌏🌏🎈🎈
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