Today’s poem is a self portrait piece I wrote in September 2018, which I posted earlier today on Go Dog Go Cafe >> http://godoggocafe.com/2021/09/03/throwback-friday-looking-at-the-mirror-by-ivor-steven/
Looking At the Mirror
I see an oldish bloke, who likes to write poetry
Personal topics and our world’s society
Why don’t I try to write a bigger story?
Flash fiction, and there’s enough for a book
Am I too afraid to really look?
All my poems are quite shortish
Like last year’s birthday cake wish
Maybe I’ll say, “I’m far too lazy”
I can’t tell them, I’m a bit crazy!!
Nor that I’m a mad Lord of Wizardry
Best I turn the mirror, for another view
They want to know about me and you
I see a bald man, just like my dad
And that’s not at all bad
I always said, if I grew up
To be half as good as my dad
I’d be very happy and proud
And well ahead of the crowd
He was a kind and thoughtful man
I suppose I’m honest and lend a hand
I see, I’m showing my age
My journey has torn many a page
And it’s not that I’m overly sad
My veneer shows everyone I’m glad
I’ve lived my promise, for better and for worse
And I loved my job, a carer during her curse
Ivor Steven (c) September 2018
That last line sums up everything, Ivor! You should be proud of yourself. 😊💙
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Thank you dear Punam 😊🌏🥰
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Always a pleasure. 🤗😊💙
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You’re a good man, Ivor. I only know you through your blog, but your kindness and positivity shines through with every post.
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Thank you Lois for your kind words 😊🌏🥰
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A lovely mirror image, with a last line that sums up your gentle dedication
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Thank you Derrick for your kind words
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‘I can’t tell them, I’m a bit crazy!!
Nor that I’m a mad Lord of Wizardry’
Why ever not, Ivor? Go for it! 🧙 ⭐️🧙
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Haha .. I think everyone knows by now 😊🌏🤗
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Love the look at yourself
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Thank you Beth 😊
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So many of us are proud of you, too! Ivor, please keep being you!
You bring us joy, wisdom, and love! Your family smiles down on you from above!
The world is a better place because you are here! You give us smiles…you give us cheer!
Write away…your poems are always so right-on* and true! Ivor, please keep being you!
(((HUGS))) 🙂
PATS and RUBS to Sir Frankie! 🙂
* relevant, relatable, correct, encouraging 🙂
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Oh you’ve doubled up on the message .. now I need double the hankies .. 🤗😍🌏
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YAY for hankies! 😀
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yep …😥🐶🌏
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This is such a beautiful nostalgic poem Ivor. It flows so well and obviously comes from your heart! You have done very well and are still doing so. You have aged very well with lots of patina to increase your value! :>)
Keep up the good work my friend!
dwight
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Thank you Dwight… and kindness of you words has me a bit emotional .. 🙂
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:>) That is ok… don’t hold it in!
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We will all, eventually, look back at our former years, and, trace the steps that took us to where we currently are, to review over what we’d done in our lives, and, how we feel about, that, is the thing we need to pay close attention to.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments 😊😎
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I think your dad would be just as proud of you as you were of him, Ivor 🙂
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I think so to Sue …
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oh, Ivor I am very proud of you…
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I love your story. Short form. Long form. Poetic. It’s a love story. 🙂
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Thank you Colleen .. yes a story of love ❤️ 💕
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hey Ivor. This is great. Really awesome job on it!! 🙂
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Thank you kindly Carol … and I’m buck home from my holiday 🤗🌏😍🐶
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