Right or Wrong


My poem today is actually made up of 3 different Haiku, however, as what often happens with my jumbled words and thoughts, the 3 stanzas seemed to fit together to form “one” poem …



Right or Wrong



As we scrape along 

In life, we are often wrong 

Before our swan song 


Are we wrong or right? 

Why do we let the moonlight 

Disappear from sight? 


Gloom enfolds the view 

Gey clouds cover rainbow hues 

Darkness stalks us too 





Ivor Steven (c) Sept 2021

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

28 thoughts on “Right or Wrong”

    1. Thank you Carolyn .., I didn’t mean to be so emotional .. the words fell that way .. I was listening to a few β€˜Loner Deer’ songs at time .. his voice gets me every time
      πŸΆπŸ’•πŸ˜Š ((hugs))

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  1. If we have a strict set of moral values, instilled, then, we would not be in, as many conflicts of, wondering if what we’re doing is right, or, wrong, because, we are, doing right, by our own, conscience.

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