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Today’s poem is one that I have revised a couple of times, and this edition is from November 2019
Tea Leaf’s (Revised)
It’s early morn, time to break away
From last night’s, dream-time soiree
But first, I must make my bed
“Yes, just like Mum said”
Oh, I gratefully do remember
As I straighten the quilt cover
And I like to fluff-up my pillows
Ready for an evening’s bout with stupid cupid’s arrows
I’ve a long storage bedhead shelf
However I’m smiling, satisfied within myself
It’s always untidy and in disarray
And last nights scribbles are all on display
I gather up this multitude of loose words
The mess of my midnight songbirds
Snippets of my subconscious memories
Pieces of forgotten wistful dreams
And I begin to decode my jumbled site
Then emotionally, I start to rewrite
About the tea-leaf’s, floating on a calm sea
Forming love letters, from her to me
Ivor Steven (c) Nov 2019
Ivor, you are such a romantic…
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Yes indeed 😍🌏😊💕
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This is just beautiful: such an intimate snapshot of your life and inspiration! ❤️
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Thank you Ingrid. .. and poem has developed into a insightful piece over the years .. 😊🌏💕
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A beautiful revision of an already wonderful poem…the word-pics are vivid, the flow is beautiful, the message sweet. A glimpse into a new day beginning and new poems forming…anxious to be born.
Your muse is always shining. 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂
PATS and RUBS to Sir Frankie! 🙂
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Thank you dear Carolyn … and I am very fond of this poem … I think it embodies how Carole’s spirit influences my writings … 💛💙🌏😀🤗📘
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Spoken like a true romantic. Lovely thoughts, Ivor. 🌹
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Wowww..! It’s so awesome and sweet Ivor..!✨✨😊
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Thank you Filarance .. and I am very fond of this poem too 😍😊🌏🤗
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Awww..! Superb..! You’re welcome Ivor..!✨🤗
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Have you decided whether you have a bed in your office or an office in your bedroom?
Love your working environment, it shows your busy mind! 😀
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Haha … you’re right Sue .. sometimes I wonder which way things are around … and now I have to ask Frankie for permission to get into my/ours/his bed … 🐶🌏😃
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Love it! 😀
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