Featured Image Above: A big thank you to Derrick Knight for allowing me to use his magnificent ‘Sunset’ photo … see his link attached below …
Today’s poem is a combination of three, haiku/ukiah/haiku, that I made on, Colleen, Kate, and Derrick’s articles yesterday and today.
“Truth” (a Haiku for Colleen) https://bikecolleenbrown.wordpress.com/2021/10/11/the-truth-is-yours/
โA Rainbow Danceโ (a Ukiah for Kate) https://aroused.blog/2021/10/11/ukiah/
“Sunset” (a Haiku for Derrick) https://derrickjknight.com/2021/10/11/todays-hobbyhorses/
Is It True? “That Rainbows Dance At Sunset”
Your soul knows the truth
Within, feel the power grow
Live, breath, touch the flow
At the end of the rainbow
We shall dance and glow
On natureโs golden plateau
Blazing, the sky sinks
Sunset kisses everything
Fall’s finale crown
Ivor Steven (c) October 2021
โAt the end of the rainbow
We shall dance and glow
On natureโs golden plateauโ
My favourite stanza ๐ just lovely! ๐
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Thank You Ingrid โฆ and this was a pleasurable and rewarding piece for me ๐๐๐๐
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A beautiful combination, Ivor. Thank you very much
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Thank you Derrickโฆ and somehow the combination seemed to flow together ok ๐๐๐
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Lovely.
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Thank you Sadje ๐
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Youโre welcome my friend
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Aw, that’s lovely, but I think it’s the fairies that come out at sunset ๐
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Thank you Sue โฆ haha .. Iโve no idea, I just make sayings up ๐ค๐๐
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Haha, so do I ๐
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Beautiful
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Thank you Beth .. one of those pieces that was a joy to put together ๐๐๐๐ถ
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Awww..! Ivor, you are always creating such a lovely and beautiful posts..! This is such a beautiful piece..! I truly loved it..!๐๐๐
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Thank you Filarance .. this one was a joy to put together .. and and somehow the different pieces seemed to flow together ๐๐๐๐
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Yeah Ivor..! You’re very welcome..!๐๐โฃ๏ธ๐
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gorgeous! โค
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Thank you Carol .. ๐๐๐๐
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What a delightful collection! Agree with Ingrid’s fav ๐
Like this guys voice and his hair … wow so gorgeous!
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Thank you Kate .. this piece was a joy to put together and somehow the different haiku seemed to flow together ๐๐๐๐๐
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they do indeed Ivor, you got talent!
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you are too kind Kate …
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‘Sunset kisses everything’, great imagery. I see the generosity of the sun when setting.
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Thank you Cassa โฆ my enthusiasm bubbles over when I read so many wonderful articles from fellow bloggers here on WP ๐๐๐๐
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I feel inspired too when I read works of my fellow bloggers.
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Yes indeed Cassa … joy and love are in abundance …
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This post feels so rich profound beautiful all of it together. Somehow I absolutely loved the last one – each line is simply amazing to read only once. I read it multiple times.
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Thank you kindly Pragalbha for lovely comments … and yes I felt profound joy when I was putting these pieces together as one poem … ๐๐๐๐๐
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You are very welcome, The joy was felt :))
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Wonderful share
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Thank you kindly ..
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These really are lovely to read Ivor ๐
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Thank you Bree… It was a joy for me to put these pieces together … ๐๐๐ค๐
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A beautiful and uplifting poem, Ivor!
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Thank you Eugenia ๐๐๐
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My pleasure, Ivor!
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A beautimous, hope-filled, inspiring poem! It made me SIGH a wonderful sigh! ๐ ๐
Derrick’s photo: amazing!
Ivor’s poem: amazing!
Mr. Stapleton’s song/vid: amazing! (He’s one of my fave singers!)
(((HUGS)))
PATS and RUBS to Sir Frankie!
PS…I posted yesterday about bull-ies! ๐ฎ
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Oh wow ๐คฉ Thank you Carolyn .. for your amazing words โฆ and I amazingly received rainbows of joy when I put these inspired pieces together to form a poem โฆ and this dancing rainbow will truly remain a favourite of mine ๐๐๐ค๐๐โค๏ธ๐ถ
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A beautiful ode to the fading sun. And I love your poem title. Like a poignant lyric.
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Thank you Gina .. and
for me a joyous piece to put together .. and somehow it seemed to work again .. ๐๐๐ค
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A gorgeous poem, Ivor! The haiku/ukiah/haiku format is magical. It sounds beautiful and evokes lovely images. โค
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Thank you Cheryl .. an unusual presentation, but it seemed to work ๐๐
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