Today’s poem, is a piece I originally wrote in June 2017, and the words were influenced by Leonard Cohen’s song, “Show Me The Place”, and this being the 5rd anniversary of his passing, I thought it an appropriated day to re-post my poem. I’ve revised the poem a couple of times, the original title was “Violin Strings”, but overall, the meaning of my words have stayed intact.. The Featured Image above, is scanned copy from, “The Wordless Songbook”, Leonard Cohen, by George A. Walker, book cover print, (A book, in my personal library)
Strings
I’m singing a song, about you
Singing words, both wistful and true
From my heart to my soul, the veins
They’re as tight as violin strings
I needed you, to take my hand
Take my hand and show me the way
Show me the way, to a formal debut
Show me the way, into your dancing shoes
I needed you, to take my dreams
Take my dreams and show me how to behave
Show me the way, to your family home
Show me how to drink, from your holy grail
I needed you, to take my open heart
Take my heart and show me how to pray
Show me the way, into your world
Show me how to fly, in your milky way
I needed you, to write some heavenly notes
Take my violin and show me how to play
Show me the way, to your harp’s wings
Show me the way, into your heartstrings
Ivor Steven (c) November “7th” 2021
Beautiful! 💚
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Thanks Cassa 😀🌏
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A lovely tribute, Ivor! 🙂 Great song! Hope you have a great week ahead! ❤
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Thank you Cheryl 😊🌏💕😎
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You know I’ve always loved Mr. Cohen. He has impacted my life in positive ways. He’s kept me company (with words and songs) many nights when my household (and the whole world 😉 ) was sleeping. 🙂
Your tributes in poems, photos, posts, etc., are so beautiful and heart-touching, Ivor! Thank you! 🙂
(((HUGS)))
“Ring the bells that still can ring
Forget your perfect offering
There is a crack in everything
That’s how the light gets in.” – Leonard Cohen
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Such a lovely tribute. 🙂
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Thank you Sue .. he’s been a life long influence on my persona and career 😊🌏💕
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What a wonderful tribute…
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Thank you Navin .. “Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash.” ― Leonard Cohen
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You’re welcome, Ivor…lovely words from Leonard Cohen…
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This was a very nice tribute to Cohen! A moving poem and resitation as well. Well done Ivor.
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Thanks Dwight …“If your life is a leaf that the seasons tear off and condemn they will bind you with love that is graceful and green as a stem.” – Leonard Cohen
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Nice!
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A beautiful tribute Ivor 👍🤝
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Sounds like an amazing love you share, with that, certain someone else in your life, the love you speak of, is, really hard to find these days…
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Thank you ..
“Don’t write about ideas … write about convictions of the heart.” – Leonard Cohen
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It’s a beautiful love song.
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Thank you Khushi …
“Love is the only engine of survival.” ― Leonard Cohen
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It sure is.
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I could imagine this set to music, Ivor: so beautiful!
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Thank you Ingrid for your gracious comment ….
“If I knew where the good songs came from, I’d go there more often.” Leonard Cohen
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Haha – great comment! 😊
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He was indeed a great man …🤗😀
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Beautifully done
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Thank you Derrick …
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Your words are beautiful
A great tribute to a great artist
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❤️
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a lovely tribute to leonard
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Thank you Beth
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Excellent poem. I really like it.
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Thank you 😊
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this is a beautiful poem Ivor! Really great 🙂
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Thank you Carol … and it was selected for a Anthology 😊🌏😀
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Thank you for reblogging this old classic of mine, I appreciate your kindness
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