Today I read a brilliant poem over on David Redpath’s fabulous site, and I thoroughly recommend that you read his outstanding piece, by clicking on this link >>https://highwaybloggery.com/2021/11/17/welcome-to-the-placebo-dome/
The below poem, is made up from the two comments that I placed on David’s site today.
Cracks In The Dome
I can hear bells ringing from the Placebo Dome
Through the cracks in my wall here at home
And still they are singing the same old anthem
Hollow words of charming wit and blunt sarcasm
Resonating from the dysfunctional meetings in Glasgow
Declaring they have saved the planet from a deadly afterglow
Absurdly, far too ironic
In a town so green and iconic
With their faces all aglow
Ashamed they were too slow
Because thereβs not enough dough
Although
The world continues to produce live ammo
Ivor Steven (c) November 2021
I read Davidβs fantastic poem this morning, and yours is a fine epilogue! What a mess we are in π³
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I am pleased you read Davidβs poem, and yes we are in a mess .. with the ones making the biggest mess doing the least ,.. putting national greed ahead of natureβs seeds π²π
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Excellent writes from you and from your friend David! Powerful poems.
(((HUGS))) π
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Thank you Carolyn .. ππππ
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awesome wordsmithing from both you and David, left likes and a comment over there but no idea if they got through his clean air filter system!
war is only about profit, profits that are non-traceable and will always preempt the safety of the masses π¦
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Excellent, Ivor π
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Thank you Sue
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You are a fair dinkum Aussie
climate extinction survivor, Ivor π
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A fine epilogue to David’s fantastic verse, Ivor!
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Thank you.
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So right you are and eloquently said
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Thank you kindly .. ππ
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Good poem more than dear Redpath.
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Thank You for kind words ππ
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You are most welcome,my dearπ·
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Thank you for reblogging my my intriguing poem on your fabulous site πππ
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A poetic please, Ivor world ππ±β»οΈ
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Thanks to your inspiring piece David … maybe you’ll appreciate this song ..
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Pleasure βοΈ please β (typo) π
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Very applicable lyric and visualsπ
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