Beyond Freedom (a Tanka)






Under lock and key

The past can not be opened

Lunar history

Locked inside the universe

Beyond the stars of freedom






Ivor Steven (c) December 2021

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

29 thoughts on “Beyond Freedom (a Tanka)”

  1. Yes!
    And a mystery that is ponderable! πŸ™‚ Got me thinking! πŸ™‚
    Beautiful photo!
    And Mr. Cohen! He always stirs the emotions and makes my ears happy. πŸ™‚
    (((HUGS))) πŸ™‚
    PS…How are you feeling today?!?!?!

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