Hello dear readers and followers, as you may know, I now write for “Coffee House Writers” magazine on a fortnightly basis, and my poem “Afloat”, is in this weeks edition of Coffee House Writers Magazine. … please click on the link below and visit my poem, at Coffee House Writers …>> https://coffeehousewriters.com/afloat/
Coffee House Writers
Afloat: This poem is about living in these confusing times of the “Covid” pandemic, and the constant uncertainty of handling normal everyday tasks.
Written by, Ivor Steven Est. reading time I min
Afloat
today I am going to build a better way
I will open my doorway to more sunrays
and walk the pathway to a shimmering bay
I need to run away from her empty pearl tray
visit downtown and watch a live play
or hang-out in the alley outside the royal ballet
just for appearances sake, I’ll shuffle and sway
maybe the town-crier would let me stay
even though I might look like an old stray
standing alone under the memorial archway
then without delay I jump on the tramway
and head away to the shipping quay
that have restored ocean liners on display
where I shily sneak up the gangway
waving my refugee pass for entry to the USA
Ivor Steven (c) December 2021
Do something different today. But going to USA as a refugee wouldn’t be a great idea! 😂
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Haha .. probably not Sadje … but that’s what I’m trying say … where can we go? … our choices of this world are confusing and complex ,..
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Our choice in physical sense are limited, specially nowadays. But our minds can go anywhere! Let the imagination soar.
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I wonder will it ever end , my head hurts 💜
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My too Willow .. we have a long way to go my friend ..
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This made me smile, Ivor, imagining all of your adventures! I say go for it 😊
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Thanks Ingrid .. and yes a real mixture of Ivor’s adventures and my witty imagination …
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The perfect combination 🤩
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A powerful heart-touching write, Ivor. But it made me smile, too.
Your title is perfect!
(((HUGS)))
PS…I haven’t been around the past few days…so I’m trying to play a little catch up now on WP.
Poor Little Coop has been ill for 4 days. I’ll try to post on it later today if I have time.
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Oh .. poor Coops ..a warm woof woof from Frankie 🐶🤗 and hugs from Ivor
😊🌏🐶
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❤
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🙂
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Ivor, your words made me smile. 😊
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Thank you Punam… we all need to smile more 😊😀😁
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So we do. 😀😊💙
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This is worth more than 1 minute’s reading
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Thank you Derrick .. yes my poem is full of confused thoughts and witty comments on the world’s complexes situation
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Love it! Aye?
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This is amazing in one way, witty in the other. From an amusing park of actions to desperate adventures, Ivor cleverly shows exactly what the soul of many long for during these trying moments wrought with confusion and hardship. The soul longs for things and places new or adventurous and would use whatever means available to reach to them. This is a true replica of the feeling of many. Very insightful 👏 my friend.
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Thank you Felix for your comprehensive comments, and your interpretation of my words is precisely the emotions I am trying to convey to my readers .. 😃🌏
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Oh, i did get it right? Wow, I’m glad i could interpret it to the poet’s heart. 😅😇 My pleasure. And am a bit curious, how’ve you known my other name? 😅 I’m surprised you do, hah.
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I saw your name on your site somewhere, whilw=e I was perusing your writings..
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I’m glad you checked through my pieces. I’m forever grateful to have you as a friend.
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I liked what I saw Felix …
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Holy catfish, such a gratifying compliment. Thank you so much 💖💖💖 oh, I can’t find enough words to express how truly grateful i am
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Oh, i did include it in my bio, i see. So funny, I thought I didnt include Felix it anywhere, haha.
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Your poem made me smile, Ivor! My travels linger in my mind for the time being. ❤️
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Thank you Eugenia .. yes it’s witty play on words and a whimsical look at our confusing world at the moment 😀🌏
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Yes, you nailed it well! 😊
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Thank you Eugenia 😊🌏
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You’re welcome, Ivor! 😉
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Move to the US? You’ve got to be kidding – you really must be confused. 😀
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Yep .. my whimsical look at our very confused world 🌏😀😎
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A great poem, my friend, I love your immigrant pass to board the ship. A very nice touch!
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Thank you Dwight … yes .. confusion as it’s best …leaving your own because of feeling alienated …
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You are welcome!
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Congratulations
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Thank you Ali 😊🌏
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That is awesome, dude!
Also, please do support my site as well! Check it out once.
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