Here is my poem “Scars Revived” that I posted earlier on ‘Throwback Friday’ at “Go Dog Go Cafe”…
Today I am presenting another poem that I wrote during my three months of hospitalisation, between November 2018 and February 2019, and now three years later, my then abstract words are still readable.
Scars Revived
Days were dimly full of mace
I was a seedy old scar-face
With a shredded dark heart
In need of a surgeon’s restart
My innards were slashed and torn
Stuffed with yesterdays corn
My brains were in a rotted pumpkin-head
Emptied, throw out into the shed
Ankles shattered, with crinkled toes
I looked like a weathered scarecrow
Sirens screeched and screamed
My angels golden chariot beamed
Nurses in white, doctors in blue
They all came to my rescue
Sewed my broken heart together
My rubber soul became light as a feather
Inspired dreams were renewed
A familiar smile re-screwed
My body’s bindings restrengthened
Life revived and internally lengthened
Ivor Steven (c) December 2018
G’day, and…
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Teddi Kyzer
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Powerful description of a scary health encounter.
Hope you heart healthy now.
Have a wonderful weekend …
Isadora 😎
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Thank you Isadora .. every new weekend is a good weekend 😊🌏💕
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It must have been a scary time. I’m glad you were granted a fresh lease on life.
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Thank you Sadje.. I’m like a cat with nine lives 😊🌏😀
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You’re welcome! Enjoy
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I love this harsh and weathered view or your life and the renewal that followed. Glad you are still here!
dwight
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Thank you Dwight .. I am glad I was able to write such an amazing poetic journal about those months
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Real poetry comes easy, even in hard times.
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Yep .. my hospital bed was a messy poet’s studio for 3 months … always lots of cheeky from the nurses about the state of my “Office” 😊🌏
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Ha… a little bright spot in a cloudy day!
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Haha .. definitely lots of lighthearted moments 😀
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:>)
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Scary, indeed. 😦 So happy you are still with us! 🙂
I went to the site and left a comment there. 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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Thank you Carolyn .. and I always surprised and amazed at my poetic journal from those months .. 🌏😊🤗💕🐶
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It’s good to go back and relive your poetry journey. 🙂
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Yes .. especially when it was such a hard time remember … I had many things going on .. 😊🌏🤗🐶
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I am very glad and grateful for you, that this is now only a beautiful poem, read as a throwback.
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Thank you Pragalbha .. and life throws us many challenges .. and there are many helpers along our journey .. and to them I am forever grateful 😊🌏💕
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You are very welcome _()_
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Your heart!??!! What have I missed? When did you have a heart attack?
I thought you’d had strokes!
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Hi Sue … No you didn’t miss nothing … but the specialist couldn’t work out why I was producing blood clots (tiny ones) continually … so my heart was more than thoroughly examined by every machine known to man! … plus my lungs, stomach, and any other organ they could get there hands on! … In the end they couldn’t find the source of my problem … and now I am on a bucket load of tablets every day .. but I am still here, and all well ??
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I for one am very glad that all is well!
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Do take care of yourself and I glad that you feel renewed now!
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Thank you for your kind words .. 😊🌏
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It sounds like you went through an intense ordeal. It must have been awful
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I don’t recall much of it Suzanne.. so going back through poems is like reading a poetic journal of those 3 months …
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Beautifully written! Hope you are doing better now
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Thank you kindly .. 3 years down the track and I am going ok 😊🌏
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Glad to hear!
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Excellent!!
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Thank you Walt
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My pleasure my friend
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Your poem is a good reminder that we must live and enjoy every moment. 🙏🏻
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments Eugenia 💕🤗🌏
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Most welcome, Ivor. 😊
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