I have memorized pain
I feel caressed by the rain
Soothing my daily pain
Let it rain
I am over being a champion
Floating on a cloudy high
I breathe in and sigh
Be at peace I decry
Stop doubting how and why
We are one world
Under the one sky
I have memorized pain
I feel caressed by the rain
Soothing my daily pain
Let it rain
I am over being a champion
Floating on a cloudy high
I breathe in and sigh
Be at peace I decry
Stop doubting how and why
We are one world
Under the one sky
I feel your pain my friend, like I feel my ownβ¦
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Nothing is easy about getting older Walt ..ππ
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so true Ivor π
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Let it rain
I am over being a champion
Rain and pain make good metaphors. The older we get the more we get, rained on it seems.
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Yes Dwight, getting old is not easy π€π
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Your poem reminded me of the Creedence song… Who’ll stop the Rain.
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Wow .. I love that song πΆπ
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Yes, it is one of the best!
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If only we all felt like this.
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Things would then change Sadje ππ
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They would.
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Amen π
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Thank you Ingridβ¦ π
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Heart-touching, but brilliant poem, Ivor!
As we grow more well-seasoned, there seems to be more rain and more pain. Or maybe our years of life have made us more aware, more sensitive, more compassionate in important ways. π
And we can still be a good role model to others of “one world under one sky”…let’s take care of our world and each other. π
Love the Ben Som vid and music!
(((HUGS))) πβ
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Oh that Ben Som music/video definitely reflected the my thoughts πΆπ Thank you Carolyn π€πΆπ
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lovely Ivor π
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Petty selfishness and greed are at the root of the world’s problems, I think. Seeing the earth from space should put things into perspective. We need a global perspective…we need to work together!
Getting older and less able to do some things, we can still speak the truth. Thank you for always doing that, Ivor.
This is another beautiful poem, and another gentle message to guide us. β€ β€ β€
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If only! π
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Yep ..in my fantasy dream world .. ππ
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First two lines are brilliant;
Iβve memorized my pain
I feel caressed by the rain
Old age and pain that rainsβ¦
Beautiful my friend.
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Thank you Tanya .. haha .. the words that come out of my head in 7mins .. ππ
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Oh how lovely! Let the rain wash away all the pain.
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Thank you Parihit
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I felt this one Ivor.
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Thanks .. it worked then
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