Introduction
Naked I stand before Him
Stripped of common decency
Debased, I kneel crying
Sad words fall like rain
Tanks are still rolling
Over the Ukraine
My Tanka’s are scrolling
Down their bloody drains
Tanka #1. Sad Sky
False words smudge old clouds
Gray clouds hang under sad sky
The sad sky decries
โChildren are our butterflies
And please stop the warring liesโ
Tanka #2. Broken Biscuits
Life is imperfect
Like broken war-time biscuits
Re-connection waits
Reconciliation stops
Life’s sweet shortbread’s unopened
Tanka #3. Abandoned
May the stormy winds
Calmly abate in Europe
And bring peace quickly
Do not forget the children
We cannot abandon them
Epilogue
Cover me
Give me beauty
Inspire me
Calm me
Save me
From that deadly bee
Above the Black Sea
Ivor Steven (c) March 2022
Really powerful. I love War Pigs. It’s a really great song.
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Yeah “War Pig” .. a powerful song for my collection words .. Thanks Timothy
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Such an evocative collection of poems.
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Ivor, your words are vivid and haunting. Praying for humanity.
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Thank you Punam… I was writing lots of little pieces and then I decided to make into one collction .. I wasn’t sure if it would work ..๐โฎ๐ค
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It worked like a charm, Ivor. You are welcome. ๐
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Ivor, these words are magnificent.
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Thank you Kim for wonderful compliment โฎ๏ธ๐ค๐
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Appropriate song. A favourite ๐
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Yeah .. a powerful song for my epic style poem
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Superb
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Thank you Derrick
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Such, an, awful reality, for the people, who are, caught, in the midst of this, war that’s, not their own, choosing, and yet, nobody cares, what the people, say…
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Governments don’t worry about the people .. only themselves and their own selfish interests
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devastating
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Yes … it has been ..
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“Most” of us can relate to this “Naked I stand before Him/Stripped of common decency/Debased, I kneel crying” now. Evil, never will understand. Strong words Ivor. So strong.
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My emotions are are strong Colleen, and I am feeling inadequate
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I think most of us feel just that….inadequate. Good choice of words Ivor.
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I feel this too, Ivor – raw emotion and helplessness.
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Thatโs nice to know V.J. .. Iโm not alone ๐ค๐
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Heartfelt and very relevant words. I specially like the line, โ children are our butterfliesโโฆ such a marvelous line. Praying for the peace!
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Thank you Tanya .. and Iโm extremely happy with how my piece turned out โฎ๏ธ๐ค๐
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Aww ๐ฅฐ a satisfied poet implies content world. Poems are really heartfelt and some of the lines are beautiful and poignant.
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Your warm my heart..โค๏ธ๐
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I agree with the others, very powerful. ๐
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Thank you Sue โฎ๏ธ๐๐ค
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It is a sorry state of affairs, Ivor!
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I feel the mood around the world is shock and horrorโฆ
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What a gorgeous collection of mini poems, Ivor! Each one is alive with its own personable imagery, yet they come together to form a wonderful whole.
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Thank you Jaya .. a writing experiment for me, that seemed to present ok โฎ๏ธ๐ค๐
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Such beautiful, powerful & heartfelt collection of poems, Ivor โจ๐๐ซ
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Thank you for your kind comments Navin โฎ๐ค๐
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You’re welcome, Ivor ๐ซ๐คโจ
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Absolutely love this flow you created – Introduction and the following. So beautiful and powerful, so alive for today’s world.
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Thank you Pragalbha … I was writing these tanka’s over the weekend … and the I decided to put them together in one complete poem, I’m rapt you liked my Introduction and epilogue pieces … โฎ๐ค๐๐
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These are beautiful and powerful.
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Thank you Bridgette
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Eloquent poetry, Ivor! You express the horror, the tragedy, and the desperation of the current crisis! Vivid imagery. A heart-touching poem! โค
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Thanks Cheryl .. war is a tragic subject to write about.. and sometimes my tears flood my writings .. and emotions pour out my heart โฎ๏ธ๐ค๐โค๏ธ
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Hello dear, I was hoping if we could share some business ideas
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The only thing that war, benefits, is the, wills of, dictators.
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Egomaniacs
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mini poems.. strong message.. sharing your well written sentiments. ๐๐๐๐๐
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Thanks Cindy.. lots of thoughts .. lots of fears.. too many tears.. โฎ๏ธ๐ค๐
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YES, I FEEL YA for sure my friend.. we keep going til it’s over and hopeful as we weep and pray!๐๐๐
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Powerful lines Ivor
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But I feel powerless, as we all do ..
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We do Ivor
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What is going on is so diabolical! War is Hell!
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I agree Dwight … in the middle of Europe, in supposedly these modern & well informed time … the whole situation seems archaic and barbaric
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That it is!
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