G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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50 thoughts on “Harsh Theives (a Tanka)”
A fine poetic current-events recap, Ivor. Well done. Thanks.
(Friendly proof-reader query: Since your L1 ‘winds’ is plural, shouldn’t your final line use ‘depart’ instead of ‘departs’. as in ” The harsh Baltic winds [do all this damage] then depart as Russian thieves”?
a bullet to the heart Ivor.. ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐๐๐ I hope the song the crazies that stop at nothing.
I wish we could blast this song everywhere! ๐๐ป
So sad, Ivor! Very cold winds are blowing. Ukrainians trying to escape by walking across borders, trapped in basements, not enough to eat, no power and water…Poorly provisioned Russian soldiers trapped in a war they didn’t sign up for, fighting halfheartedly against their neighbors. All because of one man and his evil regime!
Thank you Cheryl .. and youโve summed up my sentiments perfectly .. but here I am laying in bed a million miles away from the devastation snug as bug wishing there was more I could doโฆ
Everyday the news seems to worse โฆ โฎ๏ธ๐ฅฒ๐ค๐๐
We have Ukrainian next-door neighbors. a very nice family with young children at home. She has her relatives still in Ukraine. Many Ukrainians and Russians live in our area.
Timely. Powerful. Important. Heart-touching. Thank you for sharing your words and your heart, Ivor. Keep writing. Writing can bring positive changes.
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธ
A fine poetic current-events recap, Ivor. Well done. Thanks.
(Friendly proof-reader query: Since your L1 ‘winds’ is plural, shouldn’t your final line use ‘depart’ instead of ‘departs’. as in ” The harsh Baltic winds [do all this damage] then depart as Russian thieves”?
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Thank You Ron . .. and I am looking your proof read suggesting .. hmmm โฆ youโre right .. this posting at midnight is not good for me ๐ค
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It is so sad… praying for peace ๐
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The war situation is horrificly sad ๐ฅฒ๐
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Sad
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Excellent video – Holds true even and especially now!
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Thank you Val ๐๐๐
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I just hope he doesn’t go after the Baltic States next…
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Any thing is probable with this maniac โฎ๏ธ๐ค๐๐
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๐ณ
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Brilliant
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Thank you d.az
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a bullet to the heart Ivor.. ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐๐๐ I hope the song the crazies that stop at nothing.
I wish we could blast this song everywhere! ๐๐ป
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Yes .. that would be a great ideaโฆ hit them all in the heart ๐ with music ๐ถ .. thanks Cindy โฎ๏ธ๐ถ๐๐
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I sooooo agree Ivor! ๐๐ป๐
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Watch this one Cindy …
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wow that is truly beautiful Ivor. Thanks for sharing it. Hallelujah!!! ๐๐๐ป๐๐ป๐
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I knew you would like Cindy .. ๐ต๐๐
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how could I not.. thanks again.๐ป๐ ! you haven’t visited lately have you?
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So sad, Ivor! Very cold winds are blowing. Ukrainians trying to escape by walking across borders, trapped in basements, not enough to eat, no power and water…Poorly provisioned Russian soldiers trapped in a war they didn’t sign up for, fighting halfheartedly against their neighbors. All because of one man and his evil regime!
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Thank you Cheryl .. and youโve summed up my sentiments perfectly .. but here I am laying in bed a million miles away from the devastation snug as bug wishing there was more I could doโฆ
Everyday the news seems to worse โฆ โฎ๏ธ๐ฅฒ๐ค๐๐
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You are writing in support of Ukrainians. I think that means a lot. โค
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I live in among Ukrainians here in Geelong … they are inconsolable … ๐ฅ๐๐
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We have Ukrainian next-door neighbors. a very nice family with young children at home. She has her relatives still in Ukraine. Many Ukrainians and Russians live in our area.
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My heart goes out to them all ๐๐๐
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If only, the weather can, actually, cause the Russian forces, to back out of, Ukraine…
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We’ll try anything .. anything to help ..
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Cheryl said it all. Well done, Ivor ๐
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Thank you Sue .. โฎ๐ค๐
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Classic cold war 80s song. One of Sting’s best.
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Thanks Art … It aged a bit …
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Thank you Art for the reblog, I appreciate your kindness
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Excellent poem, and Sting’s song has swung back into relevance to his chagrin.
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Sadly his old song is now so poignant again ..
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Yes, I saw a remake of the song and it brought tears to my eyes.
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I saw this one today ..
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If only, the weather is, enough, to, stop the invasions ordered on Ukraine by Putin…
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Bravo bravo ๐๐๐๐
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Thank you Willow .. and up far too late .. itโs nearly 1.00am ..๐ค๐ด
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You night owl it’s 14. 16 here?
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Timely. Powerful. Important. Heart-touching. Thank you for sharing your words and your heart, Ivor. Keep writing. Writing can bring positive changes.
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธ
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Thank you dear Carolyn โฆ and Iโve been writing all morning .. Frankie thinks Iโm crazy โฆ ๐ค๐๐ถ๐
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Ha! Yes, I’m sure there are times Coop thinks I’m crazy! ๐ ๐ ๐
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Yep .. doggies think alike ๐ถ๐ค๐ค
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They do. And Human-Beans should think more like them. The world would be a happier-tail-waggin’ place. โค๏ธ
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Yes indeed it would be Carolyn ๐ถ๐๐
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Thank you Guys for reblogging my Tanka poem, and supporting my anti-war/protest writings .. โฎ๐ค๐
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