G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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This was a interestying video, Ivor. Animations has comes very far.
Your Kaiku is wonderful. Your second line reminds me of how
sharp a cold breeze can be. Very nice …
Am amazing relatable poem…nature-wise, and emotions-wise…I can see two meanings/messages in it. ๐
Wow, great photo and song/vid! Fleet Foxes have such a good sound. And the animation is so cool! ๐
(((HUGS))) ๐
Good morning Carolyn.. I rather like this Haiku about how the wintry mornings sharply remind us know that a new day here .. I only came across the Fleet Foxes video/song when I searching YouTube for a song to go with my haiku .. and I immediately thought WOW this is the one !! ๐๐๐๐ถ๐ถ
simple yet very awakening. i enjoyed it.
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Thank you Art ๐๐
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Very nice
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Thanks Beth
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This was a interestying video, Ivor. Animations has comes very far.
Your Kaiku is wonderful. Your second line reminds me of how
sharp a cold breeze can be. Very nice …
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Thank you Isadora .. I found the video very interesting too, and it seemed to suit my Haiku ๐๐๐ถ
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Yes, it does suit the Haiku. ๐ค๐
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Am amazing relatable poem…nature-wise, and emotions-wise…I can see two meanings/messages in it. ๐
Wow, great photo and song/vid! Fleet Foxes have such a good sound. And the animation is so cool! ๐
(((HUGS))) ๐
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Good morning Carolyn.. I rather like this Haiku about how the wintry mornings sharply remind us know that a new day here .. I only came across the Fleet Foxes video/song when I searching YouTube for a song to go with my haiku .. and I immediately thought WOW this is the one !! ๐๐๐๐ถ๐ถ
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This poem is a feeling experience, very beautifully said.
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Thank you Pragalbha .. I enjoyed the imagery I was able to create in this haiku ๐๐๐๐ถ
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your feelings in your Haiku are felt Ivor.. well done!
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Thank you Cindy .. ๐๐
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Welcome Ivor! ๐๐๐
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Great haiku! Send me some chill and I will send you my 90 F day today!
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Sounds like a good swap Dwight …
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Ha … if only we could!
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Meet you halfway … Hawaii
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Ha ha… wouldn’t that be a hoot!
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Probably the perfect temperature as well!
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Definitely.. and all year round ๐
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Beautiful haiku yes eyes don’t want to open ! Well shared thanks ๐๐
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Fine, simple, evocation
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Thank you Derrick
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I suppose you are turning towards winter over there โ๏ธ ๐
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Only 10 days to go ๐๐
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Our first frosty one this morning …
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Ooh! It must be getting colder.
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yes we had our first frosty morning
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Your post is like a blessing for us from God…. Loved it ๐๐๐
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Thank you for reading ๐๐
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