G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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31 thoughts on “I Tried”
Still we hope for a better future! …or at least one that is not worse!
Yes. We must never give up hope…we must always keep trying…keep climbing…keep moving forward, even if just “baby steps”…what a wonderful poem, Ivor. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us!
Where did you take that mural photo?
That song brought some tears to my eyes.
(((HUGS))) ❤️
PS…”Every accomplishment begins with the decision to try.”
The mural is a piece of Street-art at my corner grocery shop .. I’ve had the pic for a while, and I thought it suited my poem ok … the song is a recent one from Manchester Orchestra .. the lyrics are deep and melancholy …
Thank you for your thoughtful comments Carolyn .. 😊🌏💕🎶🐶
Still we hope for a better future! …or at least one that is not worse!
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While we have hope we can survive
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Never give up hope
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Never ever
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always hope –
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Yes. We must never give up hope…we must always keep trying…keep climbing…keep moving forward, even if just “baby steps”…what a wonderful poem, Ivor. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us!
Where did you take that mural photo?
That song brought some tears to my eyes.
(((HUGS))) ❤️
PS…”Every accomplishment begins with the decision to try.”
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The mural is a piece of Street-art at my corner grocery shop .. I’ve had the pic for a while, and I thought it suited my poem ok … the song is a recent one from Manchester Orchestra .. the lyrics are deep and melancholy …
Thank you for your thoughtful comments Carolyn .. 😊🌏💕🎶🐶
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Give me hope, it gives me so much.
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Hope gives me strength to keep climbing
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And we soldier on Ivor in hope and strength.
Love your poem and song!
❤️🩹
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Thank you Cindy … I’m tired today and resting .. May has been a long climb for me .. 💛💚🌏💜
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You’re so welcome!
Resting is good. Hope June turns a corner for you-:)💕
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JUne will be betterer ..xx
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The story of our lives.
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Yes Sadje .. we trying to reach our goal … xx 😊🌏
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👍🏼
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Beautifully written, Ivor…hope is everything…love (/ self-love) shows the path to hope
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Thank you Navin .. there is always a climb .. there is always hope, and love always shows us the way ..
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Well said, Ivor…Thank you ✨
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Goals can be a bit like the end of the rainbow! 🌈
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And we keep chasing rainbows too .. 😉🌈🌏
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We keep reaching, keep coming up ahort, and we still, keep reaching, never giving up on our, dreams…
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Yes … hoping and reaching …
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Never give up hope and always follow your dreams! 💖
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Thanks Eugenia 😊🌏
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Most welcome, Ivor!
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“All my mountains
have been climbed ”
I loved this – and there is so much to keep going for…
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Thank you Pragalbha … I had thoughts of submitting this to ‘Spillwords’ .. but I am not sure if it’s ok ..
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You are very welcome. I loved it surely 🙂
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As long as there life, there’s hope❤️
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Thank you kindly 😊🌏💕
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