G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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23 thoughts on “The Rear of Night (Revised)”
I do hope your forcast is incorrect! Not time for doom and gloom… our time is too short for that!
Doom…I hope not! And I always hope the gloom passes quickly.
What a great poem, Ivor…I find meaning in three ways…weather-wise, world-events-wise, and emotions-wise.
I always enjoy a bit of fog…knowing it will pass…but I don’t like driving in it! ๐ฎ ๐
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธ
PS…that song is so powerful and brings some tears.
Hi Carolyn .. Iโve been at my CHW Sprint session this morning .. now a little bit of time to do some blogging .. Iโm a busy 70 year-old these days โฆ I that song ๐ถ last , wow, I cried too โฆ and it seemed to be appropriate for the Russian/Ukraine war โฎ๏ธ๐ป๐๐๐
I do hope your forcast is incorrect! Not time for doom and gloom… our time is too short for that!
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Yep .. silly Ivor, itโs a thick soupy fog โฆ no doom .. Yet??
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Just ga-loom!! :>)
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What a poem! I so love the poetic opening lines and the narrative as it flows to a piercing end . . .
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Thank you Jaya.. a heavy and messy fog ๐ซ that is heavy on our minds
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Doom…I hope not! And I always hope the gloom passes quickly.
What a great poem, Ivor…I find meaning in three ways…weather-wise, world-events-wise, and emotions-wise.
I always enjoy a bit of fog…knowing it will pass…but I don’t like driving in it! ๐ฎ ๐
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธ
PS…that song is so powerful and brings some tears.
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Hi Carolyn .. Iโve been at my CHW Sprint session this morning .. now a little bit of time to do some blogging .. Iโm a busy 70 year-old these days โฆ I that song ๐ถ last , wow, I cried too โฆ and it seemed to be appropriate for the Russian/Ukraine war โฎ๏ธ๐ป๐๐๐
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No to doom!)
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Boom, boom
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Y0u create music in your poetry Ivor. lovely song too!!! ๐
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Thanks Cindy ๐ถ๐ถ๐ the world that surrounds me is music to ears ๐๐ถ๐
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And yours are to me. Welcome and thanks! ๐
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Even though so many are dying we must keep hope alive for humanity. But its natural being so sensitive you feel it all, dear Ivor.
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Thank you Deb โฆ For understanding my thoughts and emotions ๐๐โฎ๏ธ๐ป๐ถ
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Always dear friend.. โค
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An awesome combination of poetry and music
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I hope the fog of doom clears soonโฆ
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Our week of fog is clearing this morning .. itโs been eerie and unusual ๐๐โฎ๏ธ๐ป
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Too much gloom.
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Thank you for the reblog of myโfoggyโ poem ๐๐
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Well written! A great read ๐
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Thank you for reading โบ๐๐
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