G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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Definitely a perfect and clever metaphor, Ivor! We can all relate. I feel wobbly right now…not physically, but a bit emotionally.
Wonderful poem, photos, and song trio.
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธ
As I read this I could envision you standing there looking at the lambs (which is what was happening, as I see from reading the comments!). It read beautifully Ivor.
Lovely
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Thank you Sadje ๐๐๐ค
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Youโre most welcome my friend
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A great metaphor… newborn lambs wobbling and us old men doing the same on our last leg!
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Thanks Dwight .. for grasping my metaphor ..
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You are welcome. Seems I could identify with it for some reason! :>)
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brilliant metaphor
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Thank you Beth .. I took the photos on our morning walkie .. and somehow they prompted me to write this poem ๐ค๐๐ฟ๐ฑ
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When Jackie drives me out to the forest she takes me for “a wobble”
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Definitely a perfect and clever metaphor, Ivor! We can all relate. I feel wobbly right now…not physically, but a bit emotionally.
Wonderful poem, photos, and song trio.
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธ
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Thank you Carolyn … I was going to call my poem “Lambs to the Slaughter” .. but I thought it too harsh ..((Hugs))
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As I read this I could envision you standing there looking at the lambs (which is what was happening, as I see from reading the comments!). It read beautifully Ivor.
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Thank you Colleen … my morning walkies with Frankie are always quiet, and thoughtful times ..
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Beautiful times.
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We have lots of chats .. I do the talking, Frankie does the listening …
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Works out perfectly.
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Beautiful words ๐
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Thank you kindly Kirti
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You’re most welcome โฃ๏ธ
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We were thinking along the same lines with our poetry yesterday, it seems!
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Oh .. Iโm thinking too much these days . Iโm in bed with a bad headache ๐ค
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Me too, Ivor ๐จ
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We need more rest my friend ..
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Certainly! ๐
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A thoughtful, lovely poem, Ivor. ๐
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Thank you Cheryl .. me and Frankie on our outer suburbia walkie path โฆ not scenic but always interesting ๐คจ๐ค๐
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