Hello dear readers and followers, this poem today is the first piece I have written for 3 weeks, after being unable to attempt any computer work because of my debilitating back pain. I’m afraid my back is still very sore, and this article has been put together via short sittings at my desk over the last 3 days. I think Derrick’s photos captured my imagination and stirred my tired mind to write something creative.
All Photographs, by Derrick Knight, and thank you once again for allowing me to reproduce your fabulous images here on my poetry site …
>> https://derrickjknight.com/2022/08/18/no-one-told-the-ponies/
And this is now our 39th poem/photograph collaboration, and a “Glossy Coffee-table” type book “Perceptions” is on the way, hopefully, available before Christmas.
No-one told the ponies
Congregating Every Day
There they patiently stand
Congregating every day
Outside the community shop
And the village letterbox
Most of them are posting
Food parcels to their equine relatives
Hungry and abandoned in the Ukraine
Others wait forlornly
For any news of encouragement
About the health and whereabouts
From their frightened families
Inside war-torn Ukraine
There they patiently stand
Congregating every day
Ivor Steven ยฉย August 2022
A very creative take on the world situation. The ponies are beautiful and the fact that they roam free is wonderful. I am so sorry to hear that your back is still in distress and full of pain. Take time to rest and recuperate… we will still be here when you feel better!
Dwight
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments Dwight .. my poor old back is testing my patience, but I know I must be a patient patient ๐
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PT must be a bear for you! Are they working you hard?
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I have a list of exercises bigger than the daily newspaper .. I rest, do some exercisesโฆ rest, more exercises .. the process goes all day โฆ I have โ10โdifferent sets of exercises to do, which are repeated at least twice a day .. ๐ค๐
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Love the ponies and your take at their congregatingโฆ.continued prayers that youโll be feeling better soon!
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Thank you kindly Linda .. and I have to be like the ponies and be patient ๐๐ค๐๐
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Good having you back! Another wonderful poetry post. To your continued recovery . . .
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Thank you klndlyโฆ and I am slowly slowly improving ๐ค๐๐
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you are a determined poet, even creating while in pain – that’s dedication to your art
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Thank you Beth .. Derrickโs wonderful photos really deserved a story to be created โฆ oh, I took my time over a few days ๐ค๐๐๐
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Once again you have done me proud, Ivor – especially as you produced this in so much pain. Cheers, my friend
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Thank you Derrick .. I am very pleased with โourโ result and the concept/idea is what immediately came to me when I first viewed your photos 5 days ago ๐
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Iโm glad youโre feeling well enough to write this poignant poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje โฆ a bit of a task for me, but I took my time ๐ค๐๐
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Take care and donโt over do it.
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Iโm trying to be a patient patient ๐ค๐
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Good๐๐ผ
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Such a heart-touching duet by you and Derrick. โค๏ธ
Us Human-Beans can understand how those sweet ponies feel.
Continued prayers and healing wishes and healing thoughts for you and your back, Ivor.
Please rest.
(((HUGS))) ๐ โค๏ธ
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Thank you Carolyn โฆ itโs nearly 8.00am and Iโve just woken .. wow another good sleep ๐ค.. dealing with the pain all day really wears me out, but Iโm feeling slightly betterer โฆ I need a friendly โBack Fairyโ .. but I donโt see any fluttering around down here in Geelong ๐ง๐ปโโ๏ธ.. Iโll just have to keep up my exercise program and see how I go ๐ง๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐ถ ..
I am going to add this meaningful poem to my โPerceptionsโ manuscript , I think it will be a worthy addition ๐ค๐๐
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A wonderful addition ’twill be! ๐
Yes, pain that goes on and on can be so tiring. ๐ฆ
Yes, keep going and things will get betterer. ๐
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Thank you Carolyn .. and hopefully Iโll feel the signs of improvement soon ๐ค๐๐คค๐ถ
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I hope so, too! ๐
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Well done for putting this together through your pain!
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Thank you Ingrid … I am not liking being a inactive poet … but I must stay a patient patient
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I’m sorry you’re still hurting Ivor. It is good to hear you are able to write ‘some’. It seems your pain is empathetic with the pain of Ukraine. Healing is needed for both, all.
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Yes โฆ let the healing begin for us all
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Perfect piece for Derrick’s photos! I hope your back feels better soon.๐
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Thank you Eugenia .. Derrickโs photos were very thought provoking for me and my imagination was immediately inspired โฆ oh this back is very frustrating, but Iโm slowly slowly improving ๐ค๐๐
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I so glad your back is improving, even if slowly.
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Haha .. slow and steady wins the race ๐ค
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Love the imagination! โฆ but concerned about your back. Spasms can be debilitating for a few days โฆ but longer pain needs to be checked out. I have numerous back issues and know how this can really drag us down.
Do you have a program to bring relief and renew the issue? Iโm happy to correspond seperately @ valboyko@icloud.com
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Thank Val … my Physio has given me 9 sets of different exercises to be done at least twice daily … my improvement is slow, but I have underlying stroke problems which probably exacerbate the situation … I’ll send you my exercise list … and I’m going to my Doc’s this afternoon, he might send me off for back X-rays …
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Let me know how it gives via email โบ๏ธ
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Thank you Val .. I will ๐ค๐
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Thank you for reblogging another one of my anti-war poems, I appreciate your thoughtfulness and support ๐ค๐โฎ๏ธ
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Glad you’re back Ivor and you are feeling better. love your piece!! ๐๐
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Thank you Cindy โฆ Iโm still very sore, but at least Iโm able to move around home without grimacing in agony ๐ค๐๐๐ถ
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You’re so welcome. Oh my it takes awhile. take good care! ๐
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Yep .. itโs dragging on โฆ but Iโm starting to turn the cornerโฆ things are looking betterer for next week ๐ค๐๐
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I am sorry to hear your back pain is worsening. I feel for the people in the Ukraine, Pakistan and other places torn asunder by war and/or climate change. Our world is in dire need of healing. The love people from Ukrainian people who have left their homeland but still have ties there is so strong and an inspiration to us all.
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Yes Suzanne .. we are need healing … those ponies, metaphorically epitomizes the situation in the Ukraine ..
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