On Weekly Prompts this weekend, the challenge word Glimmer. Please go over and visit their fabulous site by clicking on >> Here And is a poem I wrote back in January, that I thought to be suitable piece for the prompt …
Hello dear readers, I had a difficult time writing this poem, as my thoughts were jumbled and confused, but eventually after toiling away, I think the piece gradually developed into something resembling my initial dreamy thoughts … And then I could not make up my mind on the title, between “A Shining” or “One More Spoonful” ..

One More Spoonful
I was reading my never ending story
about crossing the rivers of time
and climbing a mountain of dreams
then along the crest of a misty waterfall
a mysterious rainbow appeared at dawn
as a shimmering glimmer of hope
and above my unreachable horizon
there was a shining
tempting me to turn around
and resume paddling upstream
to where I could savour
a spoonful of life’s cream
Ivor Steven (c) September 2022
the last line….
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Thanks Beth … but not too much cream …
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Nice pen, Ivor
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Thanks Jez 🤗🌏📘
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My pleasure, Sir
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Oh, I love this Ivor and I thank you for sharing with our challenge.
I’ve not blogged this week because I needed a little break, so my apologies for not catching up with you. Hopefully, I’ll be back next week. 🙂
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A wonderful poem for the prompt! 🙂 And a wonderful poem in so many ways…including the title!
Dream on! and Write on! and Right on, Ivor! 🙂
(((HUGS))) ❤️
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Good morning Carolyn .. . I’m going to my Dome poetry group this morning.. I’m feeling reasonably ok back is sore, but manageable, as long as I am careful 🤗💕🌏📘
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Hope you were careful. And hope it went well! 🙂
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Thank you for reblogging my poem on your fabulous site 🤗🌏💕
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One spoonful at a time…
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Yes indeed Dale 🤗💕🌏📘
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Very well done
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Thank you Derrick
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Those temptations….
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