The original poem was written in August 2018, and back then I was not considering writing a book, but ironically or fortunately all the pieces in Bold Italic and the titles of poems in new my book “Tullawalla”

A Poem About Me (Revised)
How to write a poem about me
The boy who lived by the sea
As a youngster, I was not a loud speaker
Just shy and quiet teenager
Who wondered about Dreams of the Heart
With my visions of yesteryear Well Preserved
I loved Vegemite, honey and ice-cream
Then my life became Just a Little Dream
Looking at the Crystal Clear Shallows on the bay
I saw Ripples of Inconsiderateness turn my hair grey
Struggling, life was disappearing after my stroke
Emotionally I was crying out, Who’s Left to Row the Boat
Needing strength, my stars echoed, “I do Thee Shine”
Now I’m left with these Words of Mine
Recalling the days during her Everlasting Smile
Leaving my empty hands full, of Memories and Rhymes
Ivor Steven (c) October 2022
Nicely done
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Thank you Derrick 🤗🌏
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Powerful moments, powerful words!
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Thank you Barbara 📘🌏🤗💕
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A lovely share, Ivor.
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Thank you Dale 🤗🌏📘💕
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Very Clever, Ivor 🙂
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Thank you Sue 🤗🌏😉📘
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A beautiful poem my friend! My sentiments are with you as the world around us changes … not always for the best! Loved the video!
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Thank you Dwight… it was an interesting way to form a poem back then for me … I think it worked ok 🤗🌏😉
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Better to have hair turn gray than to die young.
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Indeed so .. haha and now I am 71 and bald
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How perfect is this?
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Oh I’m not perfect … but my thoughts flowed ok 🤗🌏📘💕
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the way it was put together was perfect. and you’re pretty good, too )
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I love the little boy in you and the beautiful man in poetry Ivor. 💗
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Thank you Cindy… haha.. my mum always said I was “her little boy” … 🤗🌏💕
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awwww so sweet!! 💗
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And that I never grew up … I was cheeky with mum but love her to pieces
https://share.icloud.com/photos/0fdko_E6-jh8GtAWrnopbqmjw
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awww so sweet Ivor. Love and growing up at the very best. 💗
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I think mum would be proud of me …
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Yes she would be for sure!!💕
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💗📙😍🤗
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❤️💗🥰
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Oh, my gosh! A perfect, heart-touching portrait of you, and your poems, Ivor! Very creative, too! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂 ❤️
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Thank you kindly Carolyn… I do enjoy updating and revising my older poems … and I am often surprised at how differently creative I was 🤗🌏💕📘😉💚📖🎼
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Nicely penned
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Love your poetry
This didn’t disappoint 😊
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❤️
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How well that worked out, to have those titles included there!
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Best I set up a Fortune Teller’s tent at the next country fair …
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Thank you guys for reblogging my “Poem About Me” on your fabulous site
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How very cleverly done, Ivor! 🙂
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Thank you Susi 🌏🤗📕
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My pleasure, Ivor! 🙂
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Thank you kindly for the invitation … I’m going over to have a look …
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