
Today I have been proofreading my copy of “Perceptions”, and to break-up the tedious task of proofreading, I wrote this metaphorical poem about reading the book.
Beyond the Sky
Today I traveled to the stars
And touched the outer limits
Of the universeβs Milky Way
There, I opened a magical storybook
That had traversed the mysteries
Of my bedazzled mind
There, my unraveled visions were impelled
By a strong solar storm
Originating in the Atlantic Ocean
From beyond the windswept Isle of Wight
Then finally, my distant dreams
Cautiously touched down
On the curiously tranquil waters
Of Geelongβs windswept Corio Bay

Ivor Steven (c) November 2022
Lovely poem. Can’t wait to see what you and Derrick have come with.
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Thank you .. the proof copy looks fabulous π€ππ
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sounds like an amazing place to touch down
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Geelong is called the City by the Bay
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So evocative of our friendship story
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Maybe this proofreading is sending me around the bend π€
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What a beautiful journey! Lovingly done.
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Thanks Dale β¦ a bit of a fantasy relief poem β¦ πΈππ€π
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How exciting, Ivor and Derrick!. Proofreading is a tedious task, but it brings you closer to your publication date. π
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Thank you Cheryl β¦ my proof copy is only a glossy soft cover one but the publication will be a glossy hardcover book with glossy photo pagesβ¦. however the photo/poem book is looking fantastic ππ€ππ
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Great to hear! π
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Thanks Cheryl
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Thanks very much, Cheryl
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Well that was a lovely break indeed Ivor!
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A happy and dreamy intermission
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YAY for Perceptions! YAY for Derrick! YAY for Ivor! π π π
And this poem is so very lovely! π
A journey that is so well worth it! π
(((HUGS)))
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Haha β¦ a happy and dreamy way to have a intermission π€ππππΆπΌπΈ
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Thanks very much, Carolyn X
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How lovely Ivor…and i am excited for you and Derick..
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Thank you Mich, and the actual book looks fantastic, …. ππππ€
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Glad you touched the stars, Ivor! All the best for the wonderful collaboration! πππ€
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Thank you Punam, and the actual book is looking fantastic π€πππΈ
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You are so welcome. That’s great! π€πππΌ
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Good luck with the proof. Coincidentally, my latest beach walk is about perceptions. Love the closing song!
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Thank you Frank, and that is magical coincidence π€ππ
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The sky is limitless ππ©
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