My internal flame for her, still flickering.
Burning like the old Olympic torch.
Eternally glowing, without a permanent home.
Charring the timbers of all her defenses.
The leftover ashes, blistering my soul.
The fire-front ruins, leaving me dark and hollow.
A flame, not to be easily extinguished.
A fire, always smouldering in my heart.
Ivor Steven.
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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I like the truth in this . & thank you to share your wisdom
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Thankyou for liking and reading my special words.
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That fire within and without. So special. Glad you could share, Ivor.
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Sometimes I think my fire needs a bit of dousing, Thanks Kelvin
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It sounds like you and your love have something everlasting Ivor. Thank you for giving us a glimpse.
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I wonder about love, and it’s manifestations, Thankyou. Yes, there’s more of me to come, I’m always wondering, what’s it all about ?
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ME TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Who said “Love makes the world round”, love is like a big creamy sponge cake, beautiful at the start, but if you eat too much, makes you sick inside……hehehe. I loved my mum’s sponge cake.
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I don’t know if I’ve had sponge cake. π
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Surely you must have!!!!! Lemon drizzle is my favourite version.
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I do love lemon flavored cakes and pies. π
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My mum used passionfruit icing on the top of the sponge.
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Oh this stuff sounds gooooooooooooood!
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Don’t forget about the homemade whipped cream layer in middle of the sponge. !! β‘β‘ irresistible
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Oh it sounds a lovely treat Ivor!
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I really really liked this post! Thanks for sharing it:)
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Thankyou for reading my words, is it ok to call you Amber. And I’m Ivor, from Geelong, Australia.
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You can definitely call me Amber! I’m from Bangalore, India. π
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Haha, I think you’re my first, Bangalorian, hmmm, don’t think I’ve got that right ??
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π you got it right mostly.. it’s Banglorean.. just the e instead of the i.
And I’m the first? Nice!
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Thanks for the correction, I’m living proof, you’re never too old to learn. hehe… And I see you’re still reading my poems, thankyou for reading. Scroll down to “This Lost Shadow” which I had published in 2012.
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Sure! π
I’m supposed to be studying now… But I can’t stop reading them. I’ll start studying in 10 minutes or so…π, After reading ‘This Lost Shadow’
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“Charring the timbers of all her defenses.” is my favorite line of this poem. Thanks for leaving your reflections on my poems when you visit my blog. Feedback is always appreciated. Keep on writing my poet friend.
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Awesome sir
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Thankyou Shraddha, humbled
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I have sent you fb message sir
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Thanks for the follow! Beautifully said π
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Amazing post !!
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Thankyou, so appreciated
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Beautiful Ivor, both the poem and the picture.
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Ah, the picture, recently I went to watch my niece sing, she’s a fledgling opera singer, having graduated last year. She was performing with the prestigious Melbourne Bach Choir, at the Geelong Basilica. I go along watch her at every opportunity, beautiful voice
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Lucky man.
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May her gentle soul continue to guide your hand Ivor.
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Wow Chris, this is an older one you’ve found. Not long after Carole’s funeral, nearly 6 years ago.
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Oh my gosh…I love it. So beautiful. Maybe…maybe one of my favourites of yours…
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The leftover ashes, blistering my soul.
The fire-front ruins, leaving me dark and hollow…”
What a talent you are my friend π€
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You make me feel betterer within myself,
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Good. Feeling betterer is the bestest way to be a gooder person and a fabulouser poet ππ
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I love how you’ve caught onto my Ivorisms xx
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π
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And believe it or not, I’ve a poem called “Bestowed”
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2017/07/29/now-bestowed/
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Haha! I believe it, love!!
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Beautiful π
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I am in awe ivor! This is stunning! β€ well done! β€
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A very old poem, I’m pleased you enjoyed it πβ€
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