This Week, Calen again invites us to revisit her sandbox. She asks:
“You find yourself in a quiet room looking at your reflection in this beautiful old mirror. What do you see? Is there anything in particular you like about yourself? Is there anything you don’t like? Tell us about it.”
I see an oldish bloke, who likes to write poetry
Attention seeking, or even some notoriety
Why don’t I try to write a bigger story
Flash fiction, and there’s enough for a book
Am I too afraid to really look
All my poems are quite shortish
Like last years birthday cake wish
Maybe I’ll say, “I’m far too lazy”
I can’t tell them, I’m a bit crazy !!
Nor that I’m a cute Lord of wizardry
I better start on another view
They want to know about me and you
I see a bald headed man, like my dad
And that’s not at all bad
I always said, if I grew up
To be half as good as my dad
I’d be very happy and proud
And well ahead of the crowd
He was a kind and thoughtful man
I suppose I’m honest and lend a hand
I see I’m now showing my age
My journey has torn many a page
And it’s not that I’m overly sad
It’s my veneer that show’s everyone I’m glad
I’ve lived my promise, for better and for worse
I did my job, a carer during her curse
Ivor Steven (c)
You did, indeed, do your job, my friend
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Thank you Derrick, so very gracious of you.
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This is really beautiful, Ivor! So well written! You’re a wonderful gentleman! 😊❤
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Thanks Ellen, so very kind of you.
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This is lovely Ivor ❤ Reflect your sweet soul. You are a wonderful person and you are doing an amazing job by making people smile. 🙂
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I think sharing is caring and that makes people happy 😊
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yes..! best thing to do ..share happiness and sorrow. sharing heals 🙂
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every thing you saw as a possible bad seemed to be a very good instead! bravo! and the imperfections we think we see are a life lived with much intensity. I have scars that will never heal properly, both externally and internally but they what makes me this person that someone might love. just as you have, everything about you is a grace given freely and generously. I think a bald wizard is very cute! I love that you mention your dad here, my dad was very precious to me, if I could live half the life he did, i would be so proud too. i wrote a lot about him in my early days of blogging. thank you for a sincere and brutal look in your mirror!
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Thanks Gina, I don’t think I could’ve looked in the mirror without mentioning my dad, everyone says I look exactly like him 😊 And yes we do have our scars, and we learn to live with them as time goes by.
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Sweet and harmonious.❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks Ortensia, yep that’s ❤️me 😀😊
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Lovely Ivor. I too look like my Dad. That makes me very happy, and very proud that I managed to pick up most of his good bits and retain them.
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Well, Ivor and Peter, My mum was small, my dad was tall and I am somewhere in between, though on the shorter end rather than taller. I never wanted to look like either of them, but unfortunately I inherited my dad’s small mouth and my mother’s large teeth. Now that was unfair. Whenever I look in a mirror I see my mother’s untamed hair, her double chin, but thankfully glimpses of her smile.
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Sounds like you’re a good mixture, hehehe, shakened not stirred at the very start. 😉
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Spot on!
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I was lucky Peter, dad lived til 91, and,got to enjoy his company for such a long time after we finished working together. 😊
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After Mum died we expected Dad to follow shortly after. He surprised everyone by looking after himself, with a little help from my sister, for over 10 years. He died at 96, only after falling, and breaking his hip!
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Wow 96, sounds like you’re around for quite a while yet 😊
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Another lovely one Ivor Lord of Wizardry 🧙♂️
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“I see a bald headed man, like my dad
And that’s not at all bad
I always said, if I grew up
To be half as good as my dad…”
This so made me smile. I totally get it. My son would say the same thing about his Papa. Though his dad, his nibs, has FULL mane of hair like a gray fox! 😀
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Thank you Calen, I’m pleased my. Mirror reflected ok 😆
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Love this, Ivor.
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Thanks Amber, I was happy with my reflections. 😊
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You’re welcome, darl.
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Well done Ivor, with the prose, and the inspiration of your life.
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Thanks Colleen, I like reflecting. 😊
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Reflecting is a favorite of both of ours. 😉
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A wonderful self portrait 😊
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Nicely said Walt, thanks mate
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My pleasure my friend 🙂
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Your mirror is the loveliest mirror of them all, Ivor.
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You are so kind to me 😊 💛
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A life framed and reflected, now laid out in print for all eternity.
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Thankyou, so nicely said 😊
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You’ve always known how to love well… I can see it in every memory that you write about. 💛
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Thanks ~M~ another good trait I got from my dad 😊
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Thankyou dear Michelle, for taking the time to read so many of my poems. 😊 💛
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Always a pleasure… 🙂
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You touch hearts, Wizard of Words. xo
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That’s so nice of you to say so 😊
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Beautiful, Ivor! ❤
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Thanks Amber 😊😆just a little look at myself
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Ivor! This look at yourself is so wonderful! You are a good good good man and it sounds like your Dad was, too. 🙂 And to favor him physically should make you smile, too.
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Haha, the mirror never lies, and was the bestest 💙😊
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a very fitting self portrait Ivor … get that novel written!
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My poems are my novel… ..
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true 🙂
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