I have a few thank you’s to accompay the writing of my piece “The Final Sunset”.
Firstly my opening stanza was written as a response to Susi’s inspiring post today, thank you Susi. https://iwriteher.com/2022/02/24/peace-please/ Thank you to David Redpath, for reminding me of Bob Dylan’s poignant protest song, “Masters Of War” , which I have attached below. https://highwaybloggery.com/2022/02/24/masters-of-war/ , and thank you to Derrick Knight for allowing me to use his stunning “Sunset” photo as my featured photo here on my site, https://derrickjknight.com/2022/02/24/the-assistant-photographer-saves-the-day/
The Final Sunset
Wrong versus right
War versus peace
Greed versus commonsense
Destruction versus harmony
Killing versus living
War is not the peopleโs choice
Is this to be our final sunset
Will she justifiably refuse
To open her golden eye
Upon another shattering dawn
Of our manufactured doom
Ivor Steven (c) February 2022
Beautiful lines written
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Thank you Tanvir ๐๐
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Beautiful and thought provoking poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje .. these are disturbing times ๐๐ฅฒ
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Very much so Ivor. Youโre welcome
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It is such a worry. Powerful write, Ivor.
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Thank you V.J. ..โฎ๏ธ
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Beautiful and so relevant of the present times!
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Thanks Tanya โฆ and hopefully conflict stops soon โฎ๏ธ๐
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Hopefully Ivor โค๏ธ
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oh ugh so true an mourning the morning light. lovely !๐
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Every component is relevant to this timely piece, Ivor. Thanks for sharing it, and allowing me to be a bit of that inspiration. โค
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Oh .. it was my pleasure Susi
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I hope it isnโt, Ivor, but I honestly canโt say I would blame her. I am feeling pretty disappointed in the human race right nowโฆ
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Yes .. the situation is horrendous, .. and to think Bob Dylan’s songs from 50 year ago are more than relevent today .. damn governments and politicians haven’t learnt a thing … like wild pack animals, they would rather have a fight than a feed ..
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Wonderful how you got inspiration from several people!
Derrick’s photo is such a beautiful, powerful image of so many things…trying to fly above the fray…holding on to see the next dawn…being grateful for one more day of life…finding hope, courage, and peace in nature… ๐
Your poem is powerful, timely, and poignant, Ivor. I imagine nature IS weary of us earth-inhabitants.
It’s been a week of sadness, concern…praying for the peoples on both side who do not want war and will be hurt deeply.
(((HUGS)))
๐ โค๏ธ ๐
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Thank you Carolyn … the situation is a long way away from my front door, but I can feel the emtions of millions of children’s feet shuffling up my empty pathway
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Yes, I understand.
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Manufactured doom – yes so perfectly said. Loved your poem.
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Weโll sit back and hope commonsense prevails
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Yes.
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Excellent final stanza. Very well done!
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Thank you Bart โฆ itโs hard not to be emotional at the moment
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When we buy into drama its a death knell.. that said there are powerful factors at play in this situation..but its enough to make us weep which I did for most of yesterday after hearing this news..
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Yes Deb .. itโs hard not to be emotional about the situation ๐๐โฎ๏ธ
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I honestly think its a valid first response, Ivor.. hugs โค
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Thank you so much for allowing me to be part of this powerful plea for humanity, Ivor my friend
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Maybe one day the biggest ears may start listening
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The young have the right
to be totally disgusted
at what’s going on.
After years of Blah Blah Blah
whilst we destroy this planet
now it’s all Bang Bang Bang
to hurry things along.
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Sadly your words
Sound truly like
Echoes of our old world
And Bobโs songs
Still fall on leaders
Unreceptive big ears
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Since the Tower of Babel
Kings and Pharaohs
have built great pyramids
and splendid monuments
to their giant sized egos
having won
many a bloody battle
Evil thus emboldened
and enabled
The slaughter of innocents
an everyday occurrence
just as when Cain
murdered his brother Abel
A crime that still echoes
throughout space and time
with no meaningful resistance
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And saga goes on and on
Iโll go rest on the banks of the Barwon
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More peaceful
here in Australia
than by the rivers
of Babylon, Ivor
Have a good one ๐
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Bloody History, Bloody Tears
Can you hear the ghosts of Sunday?
โSunday, Bloody Sundayโ
From your distant countryโs
Of peace and tranquility
Within your rural trees of serenity
Beyond invisible borders of rivalry
Between oblivious inequality
From the old schoolyard bully
Overseeing an avoidable atrocity
Again another โSunday, Bloody Sundayโ
How can they forget history so quickly?
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I once went to Derry
just for a bit of fun
and some Irish craic
but someone
with their head up their bum
tried to tell me that
I was actually in London
and to go wait
at Butcher’s Gate for
the next round of bedlam?!
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What a mess we perpetuate upon this earth, well a few egotistical conceited fools do, but we let them it seems, great response to the moment Ivor.
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Thanks Paul .. itโs confusing and disappointing.. but I donโt know what the โwarโ the is about .. in these modern times of advanced communication .. to go to war seems so antiquated and childish
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Absolutely, and even when it becomes apparent what the war is about it only adds to the fact that it is childish.
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Indeed so Paul โฎ๏ธ๐๐
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Putin possesses a deranged and evil mind. I feel desperately for those poor souls in Ukraine and for the shame that the Russian people must be feeling for this senseless and outrageous attack on another country.
No one wants another war in Europe, Ukraine seems so far away and yet only three hours from London.
Your poem is beautiful, Ivor. ๐
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Senseless is the word Sue .. it seems antiquated and childish in this modern age of communication ๐๐โฎ๏ธ
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Yes, I agree.
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Every line is powerful! Bravo!
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Thanks Eugenia .. it’s a terribly sad situation … โฎ๐ฅ๐
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You’re welcome, Ivor!
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Awesome, Ivor!๐๐ก
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Many thanks Gloiia ๐๐๐โฎ๏ธ
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Beautiful and powerful
Do check mine too
https://niqabiwithcamera.wordpress.com/2022/02/28/hurt/
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Thank you ..๐ค๐
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Can’t be stated any clearer: “War is not the peopleโs choice”.
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Thank you Colleen โฎ๏ธ๐ค๐
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You’re welcome Ivor.
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Beautifully written
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Thank you d.a. ๐๐ค๐
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